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Eaglestar based on this drawing by TheCalicoTabby
by TheCalicoTabby @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 1:39 pm [Reply]

This is a redesign of an old character of mine, Eaglestar. She was an RP character, and I never gave much detail on her appearance other than that she was a light grey-brown with green eyes. She was the leader of Fernclan, and was a kind and fair leader--if a bit too trusting, and unwilling to admit she might be wrong about somebody.
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This one was fun. :) Up for grabs! :3

snowbutt. @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 1:09 pm

I WANT!
rainbowscotch i will name her :)

PixieStoryteller @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 1:16 pm

Please fill out the form on the main page. It does cost, but only a common or very common or item. :)

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Hello. This little guy I do love. So he will be a bit harder to get. He will be an auction dino OR a best form wins dino. Feel free to offer anything for the bid, and pairing up bid and form will give you a better chance at winning him.
Aww, he looks so scared. This little T-Rex is scared of everything.
Auction ends 3/1/12

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Personality:
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Have you read the main thread?:


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~Willow~ - x - N/A

Jinhwan - LEFT @ Fri Feb 10, 2012 1:29 pm

Username: ~Willow~
Bid: sending

Name: Blade
Nicname(s): x
Gender: Boy
Where will you be keeping/using him/her?: in my signature, and on my fursona page.
Personality: kind, shy, babyish
Background or Short Story: adding in a minute.
Art: can't draw on my IPad :x
Other:

Have you read the main thread?: Yes I signed up to be a mod.
WIP

TigressJaguiar @ Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:37 am

bump

TigressJaguiar @ Tue Feb 28, 2012 12:57 pm

TigressJaguiar wrote:
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Zippo's Design based on this drawing by TheCalicoTabby
by TheCalicoTabby @ Mon Feb 27, 2012 1:26 pm [Reply]

Here you go, hope you like her! ^^ Let me know if there's anything you want changed. :)

1D Liam!!! @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:42 pm

I LOVE HER :D :clap: may i have her please :?:

xXxAkumaSoulxXx's second rave Rioter, Punki! feel free to ask for changes. ^^

Join the riot and order now! there are still 2 FREE slots left! after those are gone it will cost a wishlist or hoard pet! so order now!^^

Bunny for adoption based on this drawing by Ibuki Mioda
by Ibuki Mioda @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:24 pm [Reply]

please adopt this little bunny!

use from infront to adopt or this one:

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Payment:-you get to pick whether you will give payment or not(But please dont always pick not to do payment..) -
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Ocean based on this drawing by broodingtulip
by broodingtulip @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 10:14 am [Reply]

For candice33 Let me know if you want anything changed or added.

candice33 @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:35 am

Can I get a cool ocean design on him, thx.

broodingtulip @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:49 am

Added ocean design ^.^

candice33 @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:03 pm

OMG!!! Can you make me another? I will send the form in a sec...

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Kahlee's Design based on this drawing by TheCalicoTabby
by TheCalicoTabby @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:01 pm [Reply]

Here you go, hope you like her! ^^ Let me know if there's anything you want changed. :)

foreign-potato @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:17 pm

Oh wow I love this one :3

Scamps' Design based on this drawing by TheCalicoTabby
by TheCalicoTabby @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 11:00 am [Reply]

Here you go, hope you like him/her! ^^ Let me know if there's anything you want changed. :)

TheScamperPony @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 11:58 am

8D I love.... it! x] I shall decide on it's gender late. >:]
Thank you so much! <3 You did wonderful~

May I have the transparent version thingy? xD

TheCalicoTabby @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 12:07 pm

Glad you like it. ^^ Here's the transparent one for you: viewtopic.php?f=53&t=1067902 ^^

TheScamperPony @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 12:08 pm

Awesome, thanks so much!

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xXxAkumaSoulxXx's first rave Rioter, Hanou! feel free to ask for changes. ^^

Sunglasses are optional, I can take them off if you don't like them. ^^ just tell me.

I think the eyes look bit strange...should I change them?

Join the riot and order now! there are still 2 FREE slots left! after those are gone it will cost a wishlist or hoard pet! so order now!^^

Coco based on this drawing by broodingtulip
by broodingtulip @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:37 am [Reply]

My third and possibly last Kucho.

Silvershine based on this drawing by broodingtulip
by broodingtulip @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:34 am [Reply]

One of my Kuchos. Her name is Silvershine.

§ Reserved § based on this drawing by Daxeek
by mars @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:15 am [Reply]

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Reserved for perros1234 until the form is complete.

perros1234 @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:24 am

Pet's Desired Name:Brisingr
Pet's Desired Gender:male
Pet's Desired Personality:[m/b] Brisingr is fiery and spunky, he doesnt give up, he is also prideful and stubborn
[b]Pet's Desired Backstory:[/b Brisingr was bornded in the hottest flames of a forest fire. THe flames mixed with the sol of a cats whos life had been robbed by fire. So Brisingr was born. Brisngr can control fire at his will, in his rages a forest fire with appear, when he is calm the fire will sit nicely in your fireplace, burning slowly
[b]Other:
nope, just that I suck at writting stories

mars @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:33 am

Okay, I'll edit this in when your finished with your backstory! I'll go ahead and edit the "Adopt Me!" out, but I won't put any info on the pet.

Akira's Design based on this drawing by TheCalicoTabby
by TheCalicoTabby @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 11:42 am [Reply]

Here you go, hope you like her! ^^ Let me know if there's anything you want changed. :)

Ayramite @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 11:59 am

Thanks so much I love her.

Ayramite @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 2:39 pm

Could I get the hex codes for her??

wolfie. @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 4:47 pm

I know this isn't my design or anything, but I just had to come and say that this one is absolutely ADORABLE. ;)

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Akine based on this drawing by Andiliion
by ~Nonexistant @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 1:48 pm [Reply]

DO NOT COPY SPECIES OR CONCEPT!

zima. @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:05 am

Woah! What species is this for?

Andiliion @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:09 am

very nice, and its my adoptable species

For Wildherb based on this drawing by comfyorange
by comfyorange @ Fri Feb 24, 2012 12:06 pm [Reply]

Enjoy!

Taako @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:04 am

Thanks! And RIP Fila, we all miss you! This is amazing artwork.

Candycat609 based on this drawing by troblsomtwins829
by '.~VoidRunner~.' @ Thu Mar 01, 2012 5:33 pm [Reply]

:)

Bunny's Name: Louise
Bunny's Owner: Candycat609

CHERRILOID @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 10:29 am

She's so cuuuute~ owo

Name: ?
Gender: Male
Status: TRANSMIT
Color Scheme: Grey and yellow
Inspiration: "The Kids From Yesterday" by My Chemical Romance
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Okay, this one is up for adoption. To adopt it, you need to fill out the form completely. Where it says 'history', put a brief outline of the dog's life after it escaped from the labratory. Where it says 'story', write a short story about the dog. It can be in first or third person, about any part of the dog's life, and should be at least a few paragraphs long. Please remember - these dogs are cold-blooded killers, not a family pet.
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[b]Username[/b]:
[b]Dog's New Name[/b]:
[b]Dog's History[/b]:
[b]Story[/b]:
[b]Other[/b]:


R U L E S
Follow these rules or you will not be allowed to adopt any Robotic Dogs. Two strikes and you're out, because I do not have the patience for three chances.

1. No art theft - no editing the pictures, no claiming you drew it, no taking it off CS, no removing my signature, no making your own RD.
2. Do not give your RD away to a friend, through an adoption agency, or breed it through a character making agency.
3. These are not your fursona, your fursona's mate, your fursona's child, etc. The most it can be is a character.
4. No spam - no double posting, ordering here, posting without reading the rules/intro, etc.

Tisha-Nick @ Thu Feb 23, 2012 2:27 pm

LOVE HIS COLORS GAH<3333333 sorry for caps..

Username:
Tisha-Nick

Dog's New Name:

Ares

Dog's History:

Well, like any other Robotic Dogs coming from the darks of the labotors of Science. Then after 007 let them all free he ended up like all the others...Alone...But now he has been found and maybe someone can help him! (( There really isnt much on him as he is still young besides the labs,Streets and now with you going to find a new home there isnt much about him besides his history being really sad and how no animal should have this done to him or her!!! ))

Story:

(( Days at Labs))


Ares pelled his eyes open as if he was a 2 week old puppy again. His musecls flexed as he tried to move but there was very little energy in him. He blinked over and over trying to make his sight not dull. He groaned and tried to lift his body up but there was some kind of straps holding him down to this cold table. 'What...' He thought to himself as he looked around the dark dim room. His sight slowly started to come back to as did his hearing...Chatter? He could barly here some talking in the back ground but where was it coming from? He pulled his head up two inches before he couldnt move it any higher. Everything seem..wrong. What was going on? His body still hurt with pain or was it Also fear? Everything seem to be one big question which led to another.

Man in back ground. "It work..." Ares could faintly hear the man.."What work?" he wondered

Ares started to strugle trying get away from this table. He growled knowing something wasnt right. He flashed his teeth pulling at the head strap and he pulled as it slowly started to snap. After multupile times of trying he finally got it off. Ares smiled a evil grin knowing he was almost free. He tilted his head towards the four men who ran in.

"Dont let him get away!" One man hissed.

Ares snarled and wiggled more and more slowly getting the other straps off. Free! but he had more to worry about. He stood on the table and showed his teeth to the four men coming towards him. What Am i supposed to do? He thought not letting his guard down as he jumped off the table. Something seem to over power him and it was like he knew what to do...Get away and Be free from this nightmare!



"Dont try anything..." He tried speaking to Ares as If he would start talking back. The man looked at another man with a White lab coat on pointing to the other side.


Ares growled tilting his head. His legs started to shake a bit and he shook his head as his eye sight went blank for seconds. He blinked and shook his head again as he back up. My vesion? Whats going on! He thought growling again. Ares opened his eyes wide and couldnt take it anymore as He lunged with fear at the man infront of him. He had no intention of attacking him but with fear and the thirst for blood it all took over him overwelming!


The other three man stood back shocked. Ares lifted his head..This feeling? He started to like it more and more. "Easy now..." The man in the lab coat said as he turned for the door slamming shut before Ares could come out. Ares snapped and clawed the door trying to get out. Still so confused about this new world he was in. He clawed more at the door and growled loudly snarling. All he wanted right now was out but there seemed no way right now. 'Might as well and wait..' He said to himself and turned from the door hopping back onto the table he sat there watching outside the slanted window knowing that those men where on the other side. He sat there and Sat there waiting with a evil dog grin. 'Ill wait you out' He said knowing they couldnt hear him but it was a try. Who knew what I can do? After hours of waiting Ares thought Of a plan. He layed down pretending to sleep maybe they would come in and he could get away.

-Men talking outside!-

Man in Black Jacket reaches for the door. "He's asleep lets go!"


Man In lab coat stops him from opening door. "He's not asleep!" He narrowed his eyes then looked inside the room. "I dont think they sleep there robots!" ((Man 3))


Man 4 "Then how do we get in there?" He asked.


Man in lab coat "We dont.." ((Man 3 ))


"Then...what do we do?" Man in Black jacket asked (( Man 2))


"I dont know." Man 3 spoke softly


All of the 3 men stood there. To them it was all blank on what to do. But, it seemed as if there was nothing to do right now. They stood there still all thinking of a Way to get in there and either maybe shut him down or get him straped back onto the table. Minutes passed and none of the 3 man spoke to eachother on what to do.



"How about.." Before Man 2 could finish his sentence the whole labator burst into flames after the big explison. (( 007 ))



Ares perked his head to the loud thuds coming from behind the doors and walls around him. He jumped up and looked around as the Building room slwoly started to catch on fire after another loud Boom went off. He shuddered and jumped off the table as the door to his escape flew down. He stood there at the door for a second seeing the rest of the men lying on the ground. Still unsure of what just happen Ares jumped over them to freedom. After searching and Searching for a way out of this building. He slides to a stop when he sees others like him..'Im not the only one?' He said a small wag to his tail..'Im not alone..' He thought. He couldnt beilive it right now!


"Hurry along!" A female voice come from behind him.


Ars turned around and Infront of him stood another dog like him expect she was grey with blue,Silver,green markings. He saw her shake her head and Ares followed after her. She seemed to know where she was going.


"This way." She spoke turning corners until they were out free with all the other Robotic dogs.


Ares turned around to see the building explode again and go down into flames. He turned around to her. "Thanks..." Is all he said.



She smiled "No problem anything to help a fellow dog." She turned away then looked over her shoulder. "Im Atl."


Ares nods and blinks. "Im.." At first he didnt even know his name. "Im Ares."


She chuckles and flicks her tail running off into the woods by the broken down labator.


Ares watched her run off and he still stood there and lifted his head as the wind blew in his face. What was this? It felt so good. He opened his eyes and looked around. "Free" He said and relaxed but he couldn't still something was wrong and He still didnt know what it was. Everything was still so new to him and He had to idea where he was or what he was. Ares took a breath and closed his eyes hopping to remember something but there was still nothing. All he could remember was waking up to this point.

Everything was still unclear to Ares so He tried to move on wanting to know where he really came from or how he entered this world. Maybe some day he will find out!
Thats Before he was Found by you!


Other:
I Have one Question about there History...Are they dogs that where tested on are dogs they made??


Art::

Trust Me if i can get it uploaded I will have it up^^

Why I want to Adopt:
Just like the other one, They are a very well devolped dogs. Thats One reason Im in love with them...But its not all adopt the love! Why wouldn't you want to adopt first of all? I mean to get the chance to help train and make the amazing dogs friendly? What if you had that chance to help? I want to help!<3 I Have to say. Also his colors and markings are unquie! (( Oops i think I spelled that right ^^ )) Many reasons why I would want to adopt but there isnt really a Good way to say it with out going on and on about. But, I do have to say that Its not just about colors and how amazing he looks.....Its about helping this Dog<3 I want to give him a loving family((With me!)) So he knows that what happened in his past I promise wont happen with me and my family. To know that he matters to us! Even If you dont read this its fine...I like to give the person who is adopt a animal out Why I want him/her and how much I plan to give them love and attention forever! Everyone has Reasons Why They want to adopt...But its hard to explain for me...And if I could any better right now I would.

Personality:
Ares, A very special Dog. But he is very agressive and evil around People or really any living thing. Now that he knows "some" what of what he really is he doesnt trust anything that was born not made. He also isnt very open at all and very hard headed wanting what he wants to happen and follow his rules. He is very caring with other dogs made like him as he knows where they wen't through. There really isnt much to his personality as he keeps away from everyone and isnt open. Also is bery angry with what happen..wanting revenge on the people ((lets hope that will change<3))

Song Hinder<3




Birthday:

3/1/2012 <3

[b]Favriote Color[b]

Yellow and Black



UNDER WIP

meerkatgirl @ Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:35 am

Ah, these are not real dogs. They are robots, made to look like real dogs. There aren't such thing as Robotic Dog pupies, by the way, since they can't grow and are not 'born'.

Tisha-Nick @ Fri Feb 24, 2012 10:44 am

Ok thats All I needed to know^^ Ill finish the rest of my form later today!

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Adoptable custom based on this drawing by sirène
by sirène @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 10:14 am [Reply]

________ Is Kind and Sweet Fun and Joyful. loves Apples and Apple Pie's. is nicknamed a SweetHeart

Adopt This Beauty NOW!

maxraven's Ferral based on this drawing by mars
by mars @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 1:31 pm [Reply]

Made for maxraven! If you want anything changed, just ask! It will take Likes to grow, and I'll give you one because you're my second customer! I had to put a rock randomly in there because otherwise the baby would be floating in the air! If you want it out, I'll change it. :lol:

Species of Canine: Is a fox a canine?
Name: Ferral
Gender: Male
Reference (Pic or link): http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&secti ... g#/d3lnenk on the left.
Background: Trees / Forest?
Items and Accessories: Necklace from ref., if possible?
Anything Else: Thank you~

Chris Redfield @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 10:07 am

Oh, thank you : ) I love it~

Adoptable Custom based on this drawing by sirène
by sirène @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:58 am [Reply]

______ is a Shy, independent Puppy. he is a Custom. he loves Bacon and enjoy's Fire

Adopt him NOW!

Feerling #12 based on this drawing by LunarFox
by LunarFox @ Wed Feb 29, 2012 2:27 pm [Reply]

Owner: Solardream

Kipposaur @ Wed Feb 29, 2012 2:27 pm

It's so cute!! <3

LunarFox @ Wed Feb 29, 2012 2:38 pm

thanks

Solarizing @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:48 am

Username- Solardream
Name- Serpent
Gender- Male
Personality- Serpent likes to be alone most of the time, and he is generally very cynical and cold to strangers. Once he meets someone that doesn't annoy him, he'll be more open and friendly.

Sending the trade~ These are very cute, you did an awesome job with them c:

Pot-o-Gold Adoptable based on this drawing by Hoffnungsstern
by Xhat @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:29 am [Reply]

Two outcomes. First two to post gets it!

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WitchSoul0123 @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:33 am

User: Roseshine
Gender: Female
Name: Chance

Xhat @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 4:05 am

This is yours! Other is coming when other adopts it..

Xhat @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:41 am

She becomes an adult on March 17!

Nellas Lissësúl's based on this drawing by mawsoleum
by Shadow Walker @ Thu Feb 16, 2012 3:17 pm [Reply]

Because there are never enough birds. This one is basically composed of shadow-like sludge and can actually keep reshaping, making it very tricky to contain or wound (probably- you can change this in the story you make XD ).


Finished. So, since this thing is so bizarre, the person who tells the most creative story behind its creation/existence/mutation will be the winner of it. There isn't a set form, but the longer and more detailed the story, the more likely you are to win.
Judged- Nellas is the winner.


Nellas Lissësúl wrote:
The raven screeched and struggled in the enormous hands of the human, his wide dark eyes filled with fear, fight or flight instincts kicking in to no avail. His family circled in the air above them, cawing hoarsely in anger and worry at being disturbed from the nest. A curse slipped from one of the human’s mouth as the raven bit his hand, drawing blood from the tear in his rubbery gloves. The grip around his chest tightened and his struggles increased, fear and pain flashing quick as lightning through his mind as he felt the beat of his hummingbird heart thrum against the cage of the human’s fingers.

“What are you waiting for?” he yelled to the other, who turned then and hurried over to a white van with cloudy windows, the one holding the raven in pursuit, his rough jostling the raven as his struggles were renewed. His mind clouded by fear and pain, the raven’s screech of fear tore through the air like a bullet, sending his family flapping above into a cacophony of caws and screams.

“D*mn those birds,” the human cursed as he shoved the flailing bird into a tiny crate. The raven’s vision went dark as the door shut, and he lashed out as the walls, ignoring the pain as he tried to bite through the door’s lock. “Why did it have to be a raven?” he growled to his companion. The raven felt a strange weightless sensation as his cage was tilted back and forth, almost as if he were flying, but he wasn’t doing any work. The hard insides of the cold, dim cage chipped a fraction off the side of his beak as he just avoided slamming his head into it.

“They’re intelligent, apparently. And they aren’t exotic. A parrot never would have worked.” The cage was set down roughly, the humans still conversing in their garbled speech, and doors slammed. The raven screamed a high-pitched sound of pure fear, feral instincts driving him crazy as he struggled to break his way free. His dark-feathered chest rose and fell as his breathing quickened, the level of fear rising almost intolerably as the van started, a low growling roar, the raven not able to tell where this new enemy was coming from.

The van pulled out of the empty parking lot, the cage thumped to the ground, and he inevitably hit his head against the side.

His vision went dark.

~~~…*~*…~~~

The raven came into consciousness slowly and quickly, aware only of a burning sensation chorusing throughout his dark body and the low murmur of voices and the scratching of pens on some faraway paper. It wasn’t entirely unpleasant, this sweet agony twisting through his muscles and throbbing in his head. Darkness pressed in all around him, and when he opened his eyes they were filled with dark ooze, covering his body, oxidizing his feathers. He was utterly confused, and his mind roiled sluggishly. Where am I? he wondered groggily, not able to recall any memories of what had happened. Panic stirred faintly in his chest, and then the darkness pressed in again to overwhelm him, and he knew no more.

~~~…*~*…~~~

“Shh… It think it’s awakening.”

“I can’t believe it turned out like this!”


“Wouldn’t want to meet that in a dark alley…”

“Shh! Watch it!”

It woke to the sounds of human voices, rough and sharp in his newly enhanced sense of hearing. Mind flashing a million miles a minute, he opened glaring green eyes to see the inside of a perfectly spotless glass jar. No fingerprints or specks of dust marred the crystal glass, and through it the creature could see everything. The pristine white walls bare of adornments, the back wall covered only with a floor-to-ceiling row of harsh steel cabinets. Along the two other walls in the rectangle shaped room, were cage and tanks, bottles and test tubes and boxes. A sparkling amber mist floated out of the top of one glass vial, lending the room the sweet smell of summer grass. Inside another glass jar, a strange creature floated lifelessly in a puddle of dark ooze, a failed experiment. The sharp smell of disinfectant and the clamor of foreign creatures inside their cages invaded his senses, and the dark creature shrank back, strange thoughts swirling in its now spacious mind. The harsh white light glared down at the room, manmade light, light that was so bright as to cast shadows on nothing. It left nothing uncovered, and he felt exposed in its unnatural, intense brightness.

There was no more tangible darkness around him, instead a strange feeling inside of him, like his soul had sucked the darkness into itself. Not sure of anything yet in this strange new world, the creature didn’t move an inch except to cock his head in the direction of the top of the jar, wondering how he would get out. There were holes in which he received oxygen from, but nothing more. Perhaps if he hit the top hard enough, it could somehow break off, or puncture. A creak of chairs announced the subconscious leaning forward of the clumsy humans as they strove to get a better look at him, still murmuring among themselves. He ignored them.

His mind racing ahead of itself, the thing, the creature, tried to remember what had happened, but came up with only a short sequence of blurry, dark, practically soundless memories, nothing compared to the sense intake he was getting now. He heard every breath wheezing in and out of the creatures and the humans alike, the beat of their hearts or the gurgle of malicious darkness if they had none. He heard the footsteps and chattering of small lab mice in the next room, their fluttering heartbeats akin to the songbird’s outside as they sang in the rustling, roaring trees.

He saw every dust mote spinning multicolored in the air, saw every thread and beam of light shooting down from the bulbs in the ceiling, saw every crack and flaw in the floors, walls, and ceiling that no other being could see. He saw every detail of every thing, be it human, creature, or the manmade tools hung in bristling ranks.

He felt things, too, things he never would have taken the time or the effort to notice before. Like the air currents floating through the holes in the lid, the warmth emanating from the humans and from most of the other creatures trapped in the room, also from the harsh lightbulbs and, curiously, seeping up from the ground. It may look cold, this austere laboratory, but it was a place of warmth, though definitely not happiness and light in the way that most might think of it.

Cruel looking sharp instruments sparkled in glistening silver rows on another pale wall that, like the other three, was snow-white but not nearly as pure. They caught his attention, leading to a pang of fear in his chest. He knew well what they were used for; he could hear and feel the poor little lab animals in separate rooms crying and yammering for the torture to end.

The scratch of pens and the murmur of rough humans voices distracted him once more, and his bright green eyes refocused on those strange animals, those humans who had caused this irrevocable change in him. But the creature, the creature who was once a raven but now something else, he delighted in this new feeling of sweet cold darkness, twisting within him like the pleasurable stab of a knife. Planting dark, malicious thoughts into his head.

And then, with those thoughts, he dared to turn his senses in to view his own self.

With unsurprised disbelief, he realized that he was a raven no more. His body, once composed of feathers and flesh and blood, now was made of a black sludge, oozing around his consciousness and constantly reforming as his subconscious will fought to keep it in the shape of a raven, the only thing he’d ever known and remembered. Because it was familiar and comfortable to him, this raven shape, it worked. Two antennae perched on top of his head like a quail’s head feathers waved in the still air of the jar, pulsing with a neon green light akin to the light in his eyes and cere. And, as he opened and closed his beak experimentally, his tongue. The sweet darkness roiled inside of him, twisting and stabbing darkly in the depths of his being. The creature felt a stab of delight. He enjoyed this new existence, this new way of life that was not life as we know it.

He was cold and hot and sticky and dripping and frightening, and he took a strange joy in the state of his disgustingness. It fit him.

He was a monster.



This is a work in progress. All writing is copyrighted to me.

clouds-move-on @ Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:00 am

I'll Try~!

There is a dark pit, somewhere in a world of darkness. When light touched this darkness, you could see it was a tar pit. Or... something like one.
However, no light touched it ever, and soon a young creature, lost in dark, was trapped in the gooey substance. It was a bird.
It didn't die, for it could still feed off insects that passed it's new home, and water dripped from an unseen tree hanging above the pit when it rained.
Years passed.
The bird was still alive, still trapped in the gooey tar. It's eyes, after so many years, adjusted to the darkness and murk.
Toxins in the water the bird drank mutated it. And as the years past, it slowly changed.


This Story is a total WIP, btw, if you don't mind :) Hope you like it so far.

flyteck @ Fri Feb 17, 2012 2:04 pm

I looked up at the sky. Fluffy, marshmallow-like clouds drifted gently across it. The tress rustled in a soft wind. My brother moved behind me, wrenching one of my tiny new tail feathers. I squawked angrily and tried to peck him, but misstepped and fell backwards. The sky spun above me as i plummeted towards the ground. I landed hard in the thick undergrowth. My back hurt, but i could tell nothing was broken. My mother circled above me, calling aimlessly. I chirped back up to her, but knew i was stuck upon the ground. My mother fluttered back to the nest, and i nestled myself down into the lush undergrowth. I was quite warm and comfortable until i felt a hand grasp me...

"It's a young robin" spoke a loud voice from above me. "Isn't it a bit too young?" said another, sounding worried. I chirped and wriggled in the hand's grasp, trying to escape. "No, it will do just fine" said the first voice, with a strong certainty. "If you're sure" said the second voice hesitantly "but if something goes wrong it's your fault". "Nothing will" said the first voice confidently. I was scooped up and dropped into a large glass container with small holes in the top. I shivered and tried to find something warm to curl up against, but could find nothing. I tapped my beak against the glass and looked hopefully at the two humans. One of the walked over to me and opened the container. I chirped happily and prepared to be removed. But instead, a thick black substance poured in on top of me. The men closed the lid again, leaving me to squirm inside the goo. It was covering me, sliding into my nostrils and beak. The men ran out of the room and hid behind a large window. One of them pressed a button and a machine made some sounds. It looked like it should be emitting something, but nothing came from it. I felt the goo take hold of me and grasp me from inside. My bones melted away and my eyes burned. I felt like my body was becoming one with the goo. I tried to pull away from the goo, but instead it came with me. I pulled myself to the id and tried to push it off. The goo squished through the holes in the top of the jar, and began to ooze out. I followed it through the holes and began to hobble across the ground. The scientists gave chase, but i found myself able to move very quickly. And then, i was out of the door and under the sky. I had begun branching with my mother, but had never flown. I decided it was time to try, and flapped my wings hard. I got off the ground and flew into the air, small chunks of goo departing my body as i went. The men came running out after me, but i knew they wouldn't be able to catch me. I flew up into the sky and back towards my nest. I saw my mother and siblings flying, and soared over to join them. Instead of a happy greeting, however, my siblings flew away and my mother swooped at me viciously. I ducked down out of her way as she came around again. Her beak hurt as she hit me for the first and last time. After hitting me, she fell through the air and barely caught herself before hitting the ground. A blob of black goo clung to her bak, and she flapped away, trying to get it off.

WIP c:

Nellas @ Fri Feb 17, 2012 11:23 pm

Oh my gosh this is amazing! I'm getting perfect ideas for it... When will this end? I hope I have time to write something...

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Premade based on this drawing by Musicart
by sparrow @ Sun Mar 04, 2012 1:57 am [Reply]

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sparrow @ Mon Mar 05, 2012 3:38 am

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