I actually like this a lot CC:
One suggestion, though. I think you should try mixing the colors a bit more, next time? The left kit primarily uses Jules's colors, and the right kit primarily uses Adonis's colors. I would have liked to see a more unique mix of the brown and teal shades. Don't get me wrong, what you did looks beautiful. I just think more color mixing would've made the kits more unique. ^^

satyn wrote:I actually like this a lot CC:
One suggestion, though. I think you should try mixing the colors a bit more, next time? The left kit primarily uses Jules's colors, and the right kit primarily uses Adonis's colors. I would have liked to see a more unique mix of the brown and teal shades. Don't get me wrong, what you did looks beautiful. I just think more color mixing would've made the kits more unique. ^^



thank you for the input!!
i did try mixing the colors a little, but only a few came out nice so i just used their base colors ;w;
i'll definitely keep this in mind on my next entry!! thank you

I love it! This is amazing!

I will start making the thread for the adopts right away.

Could you add me to it so I can put it in the Adoptable Oekaki forum?

I really like this so far!
I'm excited to see how it turns out c:

unless he is totally greyed out (completly white) you should be able to see the khim appy and fog yes =) it would be better for you too, because i would wish to see how you can do it ^^
and flaxen canä#t pass on with ff, every horse without flaxen has automatically FF because flaxen is a recessive genetic ^^ so on this breeding it will pass on with Ff and the horse will not carrie flaxen =) flaxen can only be carried with ff not with Ff or FF

Okay, I will try to add those.

Thank you for reminding me of that. I forget how flaxen works a lot. XD

I;m going to wait until I have more free time to finish her, I want to do a really good job.

this looks fine ^^ and yes it's uncommon
for the black base he needs to haveat least Ee and aa he must have one dominant E at least and must have aa recessive a for black, Bay base would be Ee and Aa he must have one dominant gen of both to produce bay ^^, and chestnut would be ee and aa or Aa at least, for a chestnut it must have recessive e the a can have all forms from recessive to homozygous
the other genetics are Kckc and Ktkt, it can't be homozygous because only one parent carries it ^^ the horse parent has automatically kckc and ktkt then and will always pass down a recessiv gen

the cloud looks a little to roanish =) cloud normally looks like sabino just starting from the back instead of the legs ^^

I edited the cloud now its Appaloosa looking XD gah..

S h e b s t e r wrote:I edited the cloud now its Appaloosa looking XD gah..

he is rare ^^ khim fog is rare
the fog looks a bit to much like waterstream =) it was okay in the past but not now because waterstream was introduced so now the fog must looks like the original fog marking ^^ you can see it the best on the paint fog i have done some time ago =) it is a great example for how fog should look like.
to have fog it should have a Kfkf genetic instead of a kfkf because fog is not a recessive gen and will only show with a dominant marking ^^ and the horse can't acrrie flaxen because only one parent has flaxen. flaxen is a recessive genetic and will only show with ff but if one parent doesn't have flaxen the parent automatically has FF in genetic and will pass on 1 F gen so the foal will have Ff and will not show the flaxen ^^

I didn't know about how flaxen works, but now I do! I ve only seen waterstream once somewhere an don't really know the difference between the too, I'll have to have a look.
Fixed the genetics, an the flaxen.

S h e b s t e r wrote:I didn't know about how flaxen works, but now I do! I ve only seen waterstream once somewhere an don't really know the difference between the too, I'll have to have a look.
Fixed the genetics, an the flaxen.

it's a rare babe for carring appy and khimaira ^^
this breeding is the breeding that shows me exactly if a person understand genetic =) because it will always prüduce the same outcome:
Ee/Aa/Dd/Lplp/Patn2patn2/Ktkt

bay dun blanket/snowcap/spotted blanket appaloosa with khimaira tobiano ^^
the pattern 2 will always produce either a blanket, a snowcap or a spotted blanket ^^
pattern 1 will always produce either leopard, near leopard or viewspot leopard
and patternless will always produce either only speckled skin, varnish roan, snowflake or frostes hip/back =)

So I got it right ?

S h e b s t e r wrote:So I got it right ?

Cute!

Schnuffel Bunny wrote:

Oh I might add you soon enough. ;U;

Aa- thank you so much for your consideration! ♥

aah wish i saw this sooner, but your entries are super
adorable! i wish you the best with becoming an artist,
you'd make a really great one!

very nice use of the different colors and patterns <3 i think it was smart to do a non-edited batch since there aren't too many crazy edited breedings kalons generally [please excuse the time right now since everyone is still hyped because of the myo special]

♡Chocolate♡ wrote:

very nice use of the different colors and patterns <3 i think it was smart to do a non-edited batch since there aren't too many crazy edited breedings kalons generally [please excuse the time right now since everyone is still hyped because of the myo special]

Holy, these kits are gorgeous!
You've done a nice job on the wings.

I love it, but the tongue appears like you just used the straight line stroke across it quickly and didn't curve it like mimic. The stray hairs on the top of the bun look a bit awkward, and that first line of the tail appears rectangular and blocky. Otherwise, keep up the good work c: