I added on annotations so the changes I made were clear. I put both drawings side by side so that you can take a look and see the changes I had made. Sorry about the bumpy/shaky lines, my tablet was cheap, and it is quite ... rubbish at drawing accurately. I will add "NerdInHufflepuff" to be able to edit this since they can straighten out the lines IF they want to keep this drawing.
Good luck to all participants and may the winner enjoy their prizes!

*update* I just edited the head, the lines I drew were bothering me.

I am pretty pleased with this, this is my first "my own lines" Oekaki drawing since I do colour in rather than draw the lines. I did do my best to keep with the requirements but I did fall short for keeping it neat. I left my signature on the top right, just in case. Thank you for this opportunity and for hosting this competition!

IM IN LOVE WITH THESE HOLY STARCLAN

Gonna be my entries
im in LOVE with this species XD

Scrapping

Edits
Tail shine [s]
Teeth [s]
Sclrea Color [c]
Hair Edit [c]
Custom Tail [c]
No fur [un]
Custom Tounge [un]
Extra Eyes [r]
One Halo [r]
Horn [r]
Horns on body [Leg]

My Entries wrote:(WIP)
+Entry#1
+Entry 2
+Entry 3
+Entry 4
+Entry 5

Planned Entries.

• Bay Overo - Common
• Grullo Sabino Overo - Uncommon
• Black Blanket Appaloosa - Rare

• Classic Dun Overo - Common
• Bay Blanket Appaloosa - Rare

Amber Dun, Sooty, Sabino, Blanket Appaloosa
Ee | Aa | Dd | Chch | STYsty | Sb1 | Lplp | PATN2patn2

note: i'm not good at sooty
like ... at all

Black Blanket Appaloosa
Ee | Lplp | PATN2patn2

.-. I'm in love with appaloosa .-.

Ok the large trees are the actually entries. Besides the Blood Wood trees is a size reference to the Umoya Tree as well as a teeny-tiny lion next to it. Then there is the Umoya Tree with a lion size ref, then refs of the leaves and berries. (The Blood Wood are like pine trees but i learned while making this that i cannot draw pine needles to save my life so their ref is not included).

Tree #1: Blood Wood
Blood Wood trees are like the pine trees of the LoC world. They are extremely tall and grow in large numbers. Unlike much of the other wildlife on the LoC planet, Blood Woods are rather harmless to lions. These trees get their name from the ruby red sap that leaks from their bark during certain times of the year. The sap is actually has a rather sweet taste, and can be consumed with no ill effects. Taxon can often be seen licking the sides of these trees as they feed. Lions outside of the pride lands typically bring down these trees in order to gather the sap for their travels, however, this has little to no effect on the Blood Woods as they spread large numbers of seeds and grow rather quickly.

Tree #2: Umoya Trees (Ghost Trees): Umoya trees are one of the more deadly varieties of plant life that exists on the LoC home world. These trees are dazzlingly beautiful, possessing iridescent leaves that reflect the colors seen around them, and have fruits that give of an eery glow. These fruits, called Taaka berries, grow at the tree's base, sprouting from the roots. Taaka berries are very high in nutrients and have strong healing properties, they are coveted by healers, nomads, and other creatures for this reason. However, because of their slow growth rate, these trees developed a way to defend themselves by means of a toxic gas that is emitted from their roots and bark. This gas, while it cant kill a lion, causes those who inhale it to suffer from severe hallucinations. These hallucinations are typically of passed loved ones or of those one has slain, which appear as angry spirits, thus causing the affected to flee. This can, however, be bypassed by lions possessing the power over poison as their element cancels out the effects, and by air elementals who can blow the gas away.

Snowy girl hope u like DO NOT PM ME

it's a super simple design and I already own one evlano so I'm not sure if that means anything

but this was still lots of fun to do lol

the only edit is the nose horn and that's a common trait so this lil guy/gal would be too

I tried to do the Steller Sea Lion and it ended up .... looking interesting.

So sorry it is so bad
😐

his name is riky what i call him you can rename him or add diffrent stuff on him

So yeah this is my entry don't pm I'm a coppa so yeah hope u like

My first entry, I really like this for some reason

The bubble shine was fun to do, but I'm not a fan of the tail...

Color: Bay Dun Appaloosa
Genotype: EE/Aa/Rr/nLp

Two

lil fire boi. bit more of an intresting one soon XD

Just a quick one so I can get familiar with the lines