Another version without your lines, hopefully you can see this a little better than the first. x.x

Redline by me. ^^

I've never drawn an MLP before, so this is… a bit different than what I'm used to. xD;

Sorry about the messy lines, I have the hardest time sketching with a mouse. ^_^;

Uh… comments…
The eye is good, but for the MLP style, from what I can tell, they're a bit more of an upright oval, yours looks more like a sideways oval. ^^

As for the pony itself, I have a few comments. ^^
First, your head is a little small. MLPs have pretty disproportionately huge heads. xD Also, the head should be a little more above the body, not so much out in front, and more circular with a small muzzle. Too, the legs should be quite long, starting our pretty narrow from the body and widening for the hooves. MLP style is a little weird with the anatomy of the back legs, I'm not really sure how to explain that. ^_^; Your body overall should be a little shorter too.

Hope this helped! ^^

Original artwork by Skittles!!
Redline by me. ^^

might be WIP...

An woi I'm trying for. :} Cute, arn't he?

WOI - Thewolfsgirl90
Design - Alley96

Trying to get him from here.

hi i hope you like it its my dog titan!!

MY FIRST OEKAKI!!

I'm and sick and at home and bored and decided to try this Oekaki thing out.

This is Nero...the lemur.
The original character design belongs to a friend of mine on DA who was getting rid of some stuff and let me have the lemur.

Enjoy.

Also, I don't support smoking. Just because Nero does it doesn't mean you should.

a lazy cartoon of my fursona, Thorn, being over protective about some non-existant pizza

Head Shot of her...Trying to win

man-Tide is amused :B



it just keeps happening xD

Ok this was a dragon roaring at another dragon but i accidently messed up the blue drgon so now its a dragon roaring at water lol

i support gay rights. This is my character... current,y nameless.

lol. boredi guess?

teehee

My dog zeus.

Artwork and dog by me.

Personal Picture ref. :

this is for FlameDragon

Man.

Cant Tell The Egg And Dee-Jayh Apart Anymore TuT

Yay! I got to adopt one of Moss's kittens :3 Her name is Fallenleaf.

Neferet for nekolover19

Used my mum's comp to draw this. With a mouse. Gah. Wish I had a tablet >.<

It's my dad's birthday today. ouo
I decided to draw him a birthday card. He likes otters.
Happy birthday, dad, I really appreciate everything you do for me and I love you so much.
I hope it's the best.

WOW!!! This must be the best thing I've done on Oekaki! And with a mouse!
I really hope you like it. I'm only 11.

OKAAAAYYYY so.
1. Forehead needs to be a bit rounder, with the nose not coming out too much.
2. The chest bubbles out a little bit.
3. The legsshould get a bit fatter on the bottom, to look like hooves.
4. The back legs need to be a bit more shaped.
5. The neck doesnt really.....curve out like that. Try to push it in a bit :)
6. The back needs to be wayyy shorter, and the butt a bit rounder lol
7. Take a closer look at the eyes-they have a very round oval shape, with no lines or anything around them, except for the eyelashes.

so...yeah :3 Hope I helped(:




HWL