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Username; Raegami
Mako name; Vincent Heinsend
Mako gender; Male

How were they raised?;

his family was small because that both his parents died before he even became 1. his father died in the hospital before he was ever born. and his mother died when she was giving birth to him. After, he was in an orphanage and being self-taught. His parents teachinga were more strict than most would expect. he loved to craft things, work with tools, help the janitors and carpenders on his free time, so blacksmithing came easy for him. he worked on small things when he was first starting out, making small parts and just learning how to forge, shape and cool molten metal into parts. a year before his apprenticeship ended, his mentor died at the age of 63 from a heart attack. he had to take the works he made, without the aid or supervision of his mentor and do it himself. that's where he self taught himself in the true art of blacksmithing. his mentor left scrolls and books and his journal behind for him to read through, showing directions and experiments for unfinished crafts that he soon took into his own hands. it wasnt long before a freak accident, when vincent was crafting a steel rod to shape into a proper bearing to replace one of the wheels on the royal families' stage coach, when it broke when the coach went off the road and crashed into a nearby bakery. the metal split and smashed into another molten bar above him. the mess came down on his back, burning him, taking out his spine, and leaving an issue that triggers muscle spasms, and in some cases send him into a spiraling seizure. he was then, before his 18th birthday, adopted by the royal family, for the deed he did, and the pain he was caused in doing so.
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Extra 1; a blacksmith's seizure:

an agonized cry passed through my lips as pain seized my back. wrenching my aching body to the ground, lying In a motionless ball on the cold grown. My dammed body froze on me, locking every godforsaken muscle, ever fiber of my being and rendered me useless. I had fallen, fallen forward, smashing my skull against the work table. one my mentor made for me a long time ago. another rammed seizure. stars floated in front of my view as my head swam in circles, My body locked up in pain. heat swam up my back, to the sight of all my seizures. even bending too far sends me into an episode. each one worse and longer than the last.

I muttered curses in more languages than one. how they managed to slip out was beyond my comprehension, out from my mind clouded with pain. No one could help me. I was rendered useless like a weak 1 month old kitten. My body shook and trembled from the exert of my body. My muscles screaming for me to breathe. My chest felt closed, lungs unable to expand, to take in the life saving air. another cry seized my body as my back lit up in flames, hot burning flames that seemed to never end. My eyes searched the floor, head unable to move. an episode longer than the others I've had this week. I felt something warm and wet drip down my face.

My tongue flicked out, tasting the sample. a copper taste lit focused my emotions, flooded my senses, clouded my mind from the seizure rendering my body helpless. blood. blacksmiths don't bleed. yet I, in the midst of a seizure, was bleeding. I felt it. the flames seemed to be licking my back, like the tongue of a cat forged from fire, died down. My body was cooling, like one does when a hot iron ring, forged from molten iron, is placed in water to quickly cool after shaping. vision darkening, I could only see dark figures around me. untold weather real or fantasy, breathing or not. I didn't know weather I had slept or not.

something cold passed by my lips. a liquid, water maybe. I eagerly took a drink, finding the cool liquid delightful to feel. the way the cold slipped down my throat, cooling my hot veins and trembling body. the chill felt like it froze my body in an ever glorious freeze. vulnerable, I felt helpless in my vulnerable weakened state. My eyes opened, head swimming with new emotions as I processed I wasn't giving myself a drink. My eyes met the blue eyes of mentor. or so I thought. I knew I wasn't in my workshop. But in my loft, where I slept. someone was giving me water. a soft voice rang in my ears as my eyes focused on their face.

''I saw you lying there on the ground, are you alright?'' they asked, my eyes narrowed to see another face. concerned, worried.
I tried to speak, my lips moving, but the only sound produced was the groan of me trying. My seizure had escaped my power. taken me, and rendered me useless. for I was weak and could not talk. I heard the figure talk again, my hearing and attention fading in and out. until I got tapped on the shoulder. My eyes focused on them again.

''hey, I asked if you were alright?'' they asked again. I couldn't speak English well, but I replied nonetheless.

''you do not belong here. who ask you, I am fine. go.'' I rumbled, nothing worse than a stranger helping me, believing I am a weakling, helpless and frail.

I am Vincent. I am weak in no man's eyes. surprise lit their eyes, like it was the first time help had been rejected before. I snorted, getting out of my cot. I rolled too fast, and sat up too hastily. fire seized my back in a painful warning. move to quick and I'll be back. My mind told me, as a sucked in a breath, a large one for the first time in a long while. hands wrapped around my body, gently placing me back in my bed. I was starting to get annoyed.

''I no need your help. be gone.'' I snarled, my voice roughened with my broken English.

''please, you need to rest sir.'' they whispered, seeming to beg to the likes of me.

''I rest for no man. I need to work'' I argued, sitting up again.

pain spliced back, the fire crosshatching across my back, sending my body into another pain. my body seized up. the warning more prominent than the last. as if the demon causing my pain was slowly taking the life blood from my veins. arms wrapped around me, helping me lay down once again.

''please, your ill, you must rest. work will come once you are better.'' they begged.

I had no choice. I was weak. My body was sapped of its energy, even the smallest babé would sense my weakness. this dammed curse placed upon my back. one I cannot seem to fix. one I may never be able to fix. they must have seen my wound, for a gasp was heard throughout the shop.

"what happened to you?" they asked. their question was getting on my nerves.

"nothing. you need not to know." i grumbled, deciding on weather it was best to rest or not.

"sir, i hope you understand that your ill, and someone must help you." they pressed.

i rolled my eyes before looking at them, i got a good look at their face. their face was masked with worry their pale eyes glazed over with fear and concern for me. like i was weakling. this isn't the first time i've had a seizure, and wont be my last.

"i no need help. i am no weakling." i snapped as they looked at me with worry on their face.

"sir, you just had a seizure, you must rest, or you may trigger another" they pleaded.

"what is your name, kid." i grumbled, as they smiled just a little.

"cian. and yours?" they asked.

"vincent." i muttered as they smiled.

it wasn't long before i was able to walk, and escort cian out of my shop. not before thanking him with a small silver ring that i gave to him as a small thank you. he may not have directly called me weak, but did more than most would, they stayed and helped me. me. a complete stranger. which is stranger then most.

Extra 2; an apology from rae

i'm sorry my thing is all writing.
i just dont have time to do art
i'm sick and this is what i can do.
again, i'm sorry if i've
bored you. this is the shortest i can make it.

they're adorable, thank you :D
I think I'm going to try feeding it cans, like a goat xD

I'm glad you like it ^^

ooh, this reminds me of the fabled, what ever its called :3 that if you look at it you turn to stone ^_^

If I am correct this is my beautiful mare!

name?

Show name: Kingfisher Song
Barn name: Song

Can't wait to see what mane and tail edits you come up with on her

This is #16 ^^

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Oops,sorry! I'll change it now ^.^'

Bump!

What's this beautiful boys name again?

Kiwilady wrote:What's this beautiful boys name again?

Hey PK, How many extras may we have?

Click onto this thinking hey this is a beautiful mare
Finds out she is mine!!
Resa! I love her so much!!

Show name: Sunset From Space
Name: Soare ( sun in Romanian)

thank you resaaa!

OMG they look fantastic qwq <33 thank you so much Sheo!! I will decide their fates asap I should be back tomorrow or later XD So I will decide then thank you so much <33 I love them!!

OMG they are so cute! Congrats Raven! I love that green boy :3 whoever gets him is super lucky ducky ~<3

Is it for trade?

Red.Donut wrote:Is it for trade?

Thanks Merlin! He's absolutely stunning. c:

um...-steals- Tynahi you're so lucky this is just gorgeous, and ugh so pretty! You're so lucky. I'm glad this one has such a great owner and Infallible did amazing on the looks!

-Hands tolter back over-

There's a heart on its shoulder!

My pretty baby. <3 Thank you so much Fall. Ill come up with name and such asap.

holy drip babies
i am just now seeing these angel
and wowie
they are lovely
I'll talk to Dave about their fates

aahh, the left babe is absolutely adorable !!
congrats, they're lovely babes u v u

Congrats, these are adorable!

so pretty ;3;
should be seeing a half sibling to her sometime soon^^

congrats hazle! shes gorgeous <33

Arabella is an Aunt! AGAIN! xD Oldest of her siblings, still yet to have a foal of her own, I'm sure she enjoys messing with all her nieces and nephews though. =P And by messing with them I mean being over-protective of them like she is with their mother's (or father in Alf's case. xP) So pretty! Knew it was related to Carter when I saw it! Totally forgot him and Sera were mates though whoops!

ASFKDJKHGSKJDHGS--
/dies from beauty over load./
Thanks so much Kita! She's perfect!
I have yet to think up the appropriate name for her.
Lady Marionette. Yes. That's her ever so splendid name<3
She's so so so perfect<3

Hehe, thanks legg<3
You too Kitty! :3

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# 18 (my birth date)

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Gender: Male
#: 34 c:

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Username: OvercastKid
Equid's Name: (must contain D) Astrid
Age: 12
Sex: Mare
Height: 13.1hh
Coat Colour: Copper Dun Sabino
Personality: Shy. Timid. Spooky. Quiet. Caring. Friendly.

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Equid's Name: (must contain D) November's Daydream (aka Nova)
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Personality:
She is unique, strong-willed, and determined; not one to be underestimated.

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-squeals-

I LOVE HIM RESA!! <3333

WWT See You Again
Heritage

meeep

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Gender: Female

Color Palette
And maybe some green markings but just a few and not very big c:

Reserve

I will be naming her Silvia

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Name: Raphael
Gender: Male
Number: 1 ^w^

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Thank you so much, he's absolutely gorgeous! I will name him All that Jazz 'Jazz'.