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Undergoer Test for Error by Mysticat

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Time spent:59 minutes, 34 seconds
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Undergoer Test for Error

Postby Mysticat » Sun Aug 21, 2011 1:16 pm

Okay, test subject is here =D

What needs to be changed/edited/more pronounced? (I already strongly dislike the front forepaw... it just looks too skinny D:)
And i kinda winged it on the 'steampunk' stuff, and drew some of the stuff i found on google. (yay google) andddd i hope it looks okay.

Chest/Shoulderpad Ref
And for some reason it wont let me open up bionic leg ref... argh. -_-

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"Voilà! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villain by the vicissitudes of Fate.
This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin vanguarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition.
The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain,
for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous.
Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it's my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V."
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Re: Undergoer Test for Error

Postby mazel1999 » Sun Aug 21, 2011 1:35 pm

LOVE IT!!
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Re: Undergoer Test for Error

Postby Nothingness » Sun Aug 21, 2011 2:02 pm

Yes, I agree.. I love it too <3
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Re: Undergoer Test for Error

Postby Mysticat » Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:35 pm

Thanks guys =)

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"Voilà! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villain by the vicissitudes of Fate.
This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin vanguarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition.
The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain,
for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous.
Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it's my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V."
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Re: Undergoer Test for Error

Postby JokerCheshire » Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:38 pm

I adore it. ;D
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We sit back
While we watch,
All of them react.
So tell me,
What to tell you,
When the world won't listen.
The start to the finish,
Come on and let me hear it speak.
Oh, you used up all the time you're given.
The start to the finish come on,
And let me hear it, go on.
Go ahead and tell your stories.

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Re: Undergoer Test for Error

Postby Mr.Milo » Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:38 pm

well one thing is that the calf is a bit shorter than what you have and what you would call the feet of the wolf(back paws) also shouldnt be too long, the snout should be alittle longer and front arms should be a bit thicker! but everything else looks faboulous!
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Re: Undergoer Test for Error

Postby bagh.♥ » Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:43 pm

Wait is this a scrypt? I love it

Edit: Nevermind it is what I think it is. I honestly love it and I don't think I could do better.
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Re: Undergoer Test for Error

Postby Frostdragon » Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:49 pm

Oh my gosh, it looks so steampunk! Its a lot more creative than any steampunk design I can come up with, too cx

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Re: Undergoer Test for Error

Postby Mysticat » Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:20 pm

Wow never had so many comments before haha,
@Joker: Thanks =D
@mrmilo: yeahhhh like i said before, theres tons of stuff wrong with it. thanks for the crits, tho =)
@Frost: ahhh thanks! I just kinda.... blah hahaha. yay to google for interesting pictures =)

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"Voilà! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villain by the vicissitudes of Fate.
This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin vanguarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition.
The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain,
for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous.
Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it's my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V."
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