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Pet Evolotion Story

Postby GalaxianaMoo~ » Mon Apr 16, 2012 1:19 am

The Story Will Be Based On A Comic,Comic That Hasn't Started,My Idea For Everything...
Main Chars:
Emily-The First Genius,She Made With Piter The Vaccination
Piter-The Second Genius,He Made With Emily The Vaccination
Mission 1 Chars
Howtek-A Chow-Chow Dog,Can Became To A Lion And Cougar
Belle-A Border Colie,Can Became To An African Wild Dog And Snow Leopard
Bounty-A Dalmation,Can Became To A Zebra And Ocra
Prologue
Two Genius People Made Special Vaccination That Give Power To Pets,They Used The Power For Very Much Pets,So They Made A Town,They Didn't Know That They Will Be Pupular To The Hunt Of Their Vaccinationed Pets,The Vaccinationed Pets Called "Pet Evolotion" The Vaccination Gave Them The Power To Change To Other Pets,Some Pets Kidnapped With Their Powers And They Hided,The Mission Of The Pets Was To Get The Kidnapped Pets Back Home
Mission 1:Africa
Emily And Piter Searched For The Kidnapped Pets,They Tought That They Will Be In Africa,As Some Of Them Was Lions,Especialy Howtek's Brother,So They Took Howtek,Belle And Bounty For Africa In Cages,So It Won't Look Strange For The Other Animals,As They Came To Africa,They Took The Pets Out Of The Cages,The Pets Already Was In Their Evolotion Look,When They Were Outside The Cage They Runned To The Pets That Looked Like Them,Then Emily And Piter Returned To The Town,When The Pets Came To Their Friends:Belle-Belle Looked Starnge To The Other Wild Dogs,Because She Had Other Color,She Had Black And White Color,So The Other Pets Tought That She's Too Strange,The Other Wild Dogs Said It To Their Boss,And He Said:"Strange Colors?Maybe She Is The Evolotion,Don't Let Her Go" *Evil Laugh*.Bounty-Bounty Came To The Zebras,And They Said:"Hello Zebra What's Your Name?No Don't Tell It,We Will Call You Netter,You Look A Bit Strange With Other Color Of Tail Tip.."Bounty Said:"You Know What?You Look Strange Too".Howtek-Howtek Came To The Lions And They Asked Him:"Can You Show To Us Your Paw?"Howtek Showed His Paw And The Lions Said:"You Have The Gold Paw,You Need To Come With Us"Howtek Asked:"Where?"They Said:"To Our King!"Howtek Looked At The King And Knew That It Was His Brother,Mount,So He Asked Him To Talk Privatly,And He Said:"What Are You Doing Here Mount?Lets Go Home Mount!"Mount Said:"I Can't,What About The Lions?Who Will Be Their King?"Howtek Said:"Don't Worry About It,We Will Go In The Midnight".
It Was Midnight,And Emily And Piter Came Quietly To Take The Pets,But The Wild Dogs Looked At Belle,So Emily Shoted On The Wild Dogs,Piter Asked:"Why Did You Shoted?We Don't Need To Kill Them!"Emily Said:"I Didn't Killed Them,They Are Only Sleeping"
The Pets Went To The Car And They Went Back To The Town
--End Mission 1--
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Mission 2

Postby GalaxianaMoo~ » Wed Apr 18, 2012 2:48 am

Mission 2 Chars:
Evo- City Cat,No Evolotion
Record- German Shepard Dog,Can Be -------(No Telling It,As It Will Be A Spoiler)
Range- Lion,No Evolotion
Georgia- Australian Shepard Dog,Can Be -----(Not Telling,As It Will Be A Spoiler)
Oliver- Black Lab,Can Be ------(Not Telling,As It Will Be A Spoiler For The Next Missions)
Snow- Snow Leopard,No Evolotion
Clara- White Lynx,No Evolotion
Roger- Snow Leopard,No Evolotion
Mission 2:Town Attack,Busy Back
~In Africa~After The Going Of The Evolotion Pets,A Lion Named Range Said:"I Knew It!I Knew That They Was Evolotion,If They Came To Take The Lion That Means That They Are Going To Take The Other Evolotion Pets Too!So We Should Contact Roger And Say That To Him,So He Will Be Ready To Search Them" ~In A Very Cold Place~ A Leopard Runned And Gave To Roger A Letter,Roger Read It And Said:"If The Evolotion Pets Was In Africa And May Be Here,So We Have To Be Ready,We Should Search For Unusual Colors For The Pets Here"Roger Looked Around And The Leopard That Gave Him The Letter Came And Said:"I Saw Two Pets That Look Unusual"Roger Followed The Leopard And Talked To The Two Pets:"You Two,Show Yourself"The Lynx Said:"I'm Clara A White Lynx"The Leopard Said:"I'm Snow A Snow Leopard"Roger Said:"You Are Evolotion Pets!I Cought You"They Said Togther:"What?Evo What?We Never Heard About It.."Roger Knew That They Was Right,He Send A Letter To Range.In The Letter:"....The Evolotion Pets Still Didn't Came But I Don't Want They Came,You Should Attack Them IN THE TOWN!"Range Got The Letter And Came To The Town
Oliver Saw The Lions And He Came To Evo,Then He Said:"Evo,Someone Has Camed Here,It's Africa Pets!"Evo Said To Him:"Go To Emily,Say That To Her,She Will Use The Snipers"Oliver Went To Emily And Said That Africa Pets Came,She Called The Snipers,The Snipers Shooted The Pets(Sorry For The Evilness)
Oliver Went Around The Town And Saw A Strange Dog,He Went To Emily And Asked About The Dog,They Came To The Dog And Asked:"Hey Who Are You?What Are You Doing In This Town?"He Said:"I'm Record,I've Lost,I Only Remember Screaming" Emily Asked The Dog:"Record,Do You Want To Join Us And Live Here?"Record Said:"Sure Thing" Then Emily Called Record To Follow Her,He Followed And Came To Here Home Then She Took The Vaccination And Record Fell Asleep,When He Woke,Seh Asked Him:"What Animal Do You Want To Be?Chose Something That Can Fit To Your Fur"Record Said:"A Bird,And A Hyena" She Said:"Ok,But It May Hurt A Bit"Record Went Outside And Played,Then He Saw Georgia And Beloved,He Came To Her And Asked:"You Are?"She Said:"I'm Georgia,I'm A Fennic Fox And A Fox"He Said:"It's Cute For You"Then He Fell On The Floor
Emily Said When It Was Night:"It's A Busy Back Today..Tomorrow Is Another Mission Day"
When She Waked Up She Didn't Heard Nothing She Asked Piter:"Where Are Everyone?It's Too Quiet!"Piter Said:"That What I Wanted To Ask You,Lets Check Their Homes!"They Went To Check Their Homes But It Was Empty She Said:"Someone Stole Them"
--End Mission 2---
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Mission 3

Postby GalaxianaMoo~ » Sat Apr 21, 2012 3:05 am

Mission 3 Chars:
Alex- A Woman With Black Hair And Light Skin
Verginina- A Golden Retriver(Not Telling More Info)
Rise- A Border Colie(Not Telling More Info)
Gear- A Bernese Mountain Dog(Not Telling More Info)
Mission 3:Town Trouble
Emily Tought To Herself:"Where Can They Be?Maybe In Other Town?"She Drank Coffee And Went Outside,And Then Seh Saw Human Steps,She Asked Piter:"Do You Know Those Steps?"He Said:"No,That Means We Can Know Who Stole The Pets"
~In The Meantime~ "Verginina,Look After The Pets,And After Gear"Alex Said,Gear Looked At Verginina And Said:"What Do You Think You Are Doing?"Alex Said:"Verginina,Don't Do It,Just Come Here"Verginina Came And Said:"What We Are Going To Do With The Pets?The Humans Are In The Way!"Alex Said:"Gear,Look After The Pets,We Need To Finish With Them"Gear Said:"Why Do You Think That I Will Listen To You?I'm Leaving You!"He Runned To The Door Of The Pets And Came To There,Then He Closed The Door,Gear Pressed The Realase Button,And The Pets Said:"What Are You Doing With Us?"Gear Said:"I'm Not With Them,You Are Free"He Opended The Back Door To Outside,The Pets Wanted To Go But There Was Human,Gear Went Outside And He Became A Bird,The He Attacked The Humans,Then The Pets Went To Him And Asked:"Are You Evolotion?But How If So"Gear Said:"I Don't Know.."Then He Looked Down And Piter And Emily Came,They Asked:"Who Is That Dog,Does He Good?"The Pets Said:"He's Evolotion"Gear Went Around And Saw Rise,Rise Said:"What Are You Doing Here?Think You Can Run?"Gear Went Back To The Pets,Emily Took Gear In Her Hands And They Went To The Town,When They Came She Said:"It's Your Home Now,What's Your Name?"He Said:"Gear..." Gear Looked Around The Town And Said:"It Must Be...OH NO!"Emily Asked:"What Happended?"Gear Said:"I Must Take Something From My Home"Emily Asked:"Where Is Your Home?"He Said:"Far Far Away From Here"She Said:"We Will Go To There!"
Piter Said:"What?But It Far Away As Gear Said!"She Said:"But We Must Let Him Take His Items,He Is Now Our Family Member"
Piter Said:"Ok,We Will Go To There"They Went To Gear's Home
--End Mission 3--
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Mission 4

Postby GalaxianaMoo~ » Thu Apr 26, 2012 12:17 am

Mission 4 Chars:
Strike- A German Shepard Dog(Not Telling More Info)
Cloak- A BMD(Not Telling More Info)
Mission 4:Access Denied
At They Way For Gear's Home,Someone Looked On Them,But He Hided,Emily Noticed Something Strange She Asked:"Did You Noticed That?"They Asked:"Noticed What?"Emily Said:"We Lost!"They All Tryed To Find Way Back,But Gear Said:"Were Not Lost,There Is My Home"They All Runned To There But It Was Locked,And Emily Asked Gear:"Does It Need To Be Locked?"Gear Said:"No,It's Not"He Heard Strange Noise And Looked Around,Then He Searched For A Key,Emily Asked Him:"Do You Remember Where The Key Was?"He Said:"My Brother Had A Key...I Think The Key Is The Right Key,But I Don't Know Where Is My Brother.."Emily Asked Gear:"What's Your Brother Name?"Gear Said:"His Name Is Cloak"Gear Saw A Letter On The Ground And He Took It,The He Read It"Password-665803"Gear Said:"Oh,I Got It!It Need A Password Not A Key,Well I Will Try It"He Wrote The Password And Then A Robotic Hand Took Him,Emily Tryed To Take Gear Off The Robo Hand,But The Hand Took Him Inside And The Door Closed,Then Emily Wrote The Password And She Heard"Access Denied"The Robotic Hand Put Gear Down In A Strange Cage,Gear Tryed To Go,But He Couldn't,Then A GSD Came And Laughed On Him:"You Think We Are Fools?"Gear Said:"What?Who Are You?"The Dog Said:"I'm Strike,I'm A Leader Here,And You Fell Into Our Trap,My Friend,Cloak Will Come Over Now"Gear Asked:"Wait,You Said Cloak?"Strike Went Away And Didn't Answered,Then Cloak Came,He Had Evil Smile,And Gear Scared And Said:"Cloak Why?Why Are You Are The Friend Of This Dog?Do You Remember Me Cloak?"Cloak Said:"No,And I Don't Want To,Fool!"He Laughed,And Gear Cryed...
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Mission 5

Postby GalaxianaMoo~ » Wed May 16, 2012 5:11 pm

Mission 5 Chars:
Gloria- Black Lab
Mission 5: The Rescue
Gear Thought About Cloak,And Said:"Why?Why Don't You Remember Me?Do You Remember The Bell?"Cloak Said:"The Bell?Do You Know About It?But Only My Family Knows About It!"He Bit Gear,Gear Said:" But Brother...Why Can't You Remember The Bell And The Clock And Me!"He Crys And Hides,Cloak Thinks"Brother,That Really You?How Could I Do It To You?"He Takes Gear Out Of The House And Gives Him The Clock And The Bell,And He Closes On Him The Door,Emily Asked Gear:"What Happended?Who It Was?"Gear Said:"My Brother...My Brother.."He Runned Away But Piter Cought Him,And Said:"Where Are You Going,Lets Go Home And Relax"Cloak Heard The Other Speaking Outside And Walked To Their Town,He Hided In One Of The Houses,Then When Gear Came To The Town,Cloak Came Out And Said:"I'm Sorry.."Gear Saw Him And Hugged Him Really Strong,Emily Saw A Big Black Bird Flying Above Them And She Asked:"Who Is That Bird?"The Bird Screamed And Took Gloria Away,Gear Jamped On The Bird's Leg And Falled Down,Piter Said:"We Must Find Out Who Is That Bird,And Why It Took Gloria"
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Mission 6

Postby GalaxianaMoo~ » Sun Jul 01, 2012 7:20 pm

Mission 6 Chars:
Thomas-No Info For Public
Mission 6:Jungle Bells
The Bird Went To The Jungle And Landed Gloria On A Tree,Gloria Barked On The Bird And Asked:"Why?Why You Did That?"The Bird Didn't Answered.Emily And The Others Found The Way To Get Gloria,But They Didn't Knew How To Get In A There Was Snakes And Aligators In The Way,Emily Asked:"Does Anyone Can Be A Bird?"
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