My poems!!

[Our Bleeding Shadow]

Nice that sucked. Amazing work Jamming words, I like it

Cold and alone,
You freeze outside,
Snow fallss
You beg,
You plead,
People flee,
Not listening to your simple pleas,
You curl up,
You cry,
Wondering why,
No one pays attention,
You feel snow,
Falling on you,
You sob,
You weep,
No one cares for the tears that leave,
Trickle,
Freeze,
So cold outside,
You close your eyes,
When your found,
The next day,
Poor homeless girl,
Frozen in the snow,
No life,
Poor little homeless girl,
Dead in snow,
I cry,
For if people,
Had a heart,
This would of never of happened,
To you,
Poor little homeless girl,
Life was so cruel...

Don't know where that came from, but it's on my mind nearly all the time, I hate this happening, I dunno I wrote vent poetry I guess.

[krl5]

AW So sad.
But good job! The best poetry is the kind that touches you in some way.

[Our Bleeding Shadow]

Thank you sooo much you're so kind!

Loud voices,
Reaching my ears,
But I can not see,
I wish to see,
For all I see is darkness,
I hate being blind,
But I hate being able to live,
Feeling different,
Being blind,
Alone,
Scared,
Never no where someone is,
People suffer,
Far more than me,
But I can't see,
But I live with it,
All because of cancer,
A tumour behind my eyes,
I can't see,
But people have it worst than me...

[momoply45]

Lovely poems I like them a lot =)

[Our Bleeding Shadow]

Thank you I really appreciate your comments, fill the urge to write one, I'd love to have you post on here

[momoply45]

Sure. =)

[Our Bleeding Shadow]

Tremble,
Caught,
A single thought,
Swirling inside my head,
But only if,
I could see the light,
I wouldn't give up without a fight,
All energy seeping,
A lost child weeping,
Just for time to end,
My time is coming,
The waves are flooding,
Trapped withing my mind,
My time is coming,
The waves are flooding,
The last laugh is mine.

Dunno where the hell that came from but I'm watching the ring and Samara is still the awesomest ever!

[Nellas Lissësúl]

These are amazing. I'm impressed.

[Our Bleeding Shadow]

Thank you, fell free to post you're own stuff

Tears fall,
So fast,
So slow,
She smiles,
But no one sees,
She hides behind a china mask,
They leave her,
To suffer alone,
She looks longinly,
At people running,
Playing games,
She hides behind a china mask,
Always wishing someone will ask...

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Lurching shadows,
Getting near,
Frightened Children,
Running in fear,
A single tear,
Falls upon the ground,
As the world spins around,
Clapsing thoughts pulling you down,
You just wish you will drown,
Stuck in the dark,
Trapped with the mark,
While people lark,
Stuck in a tiny hole, caved,
Maybe you'll never be saved...

Depressing stuff? I'm sorry, it's just words on paper to me, but an art to wield is a bonus life X)

[Our Bleeding Shadow]

Snapped neck,
Shattered bones,
Stuck no where near home,
Captured souls,
Dream away,
Never having the final say,
Heart torn,
A new child has been born,
One death,
New life,
I'm broken,
My heart has spoken,
I cry,
Fore my heart is broken,
My mind has spoken,
I am alone,
With no one inside...

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Single tear,
Flitter down,
A single crease,
A single frown,
Life is ending,
Gather round,
We all cheer,
listening to the sound,
The sound,
Of the underground....

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A distant memory,
Lost and forgotten,
You can't think,
Can't speak,
It hurts,
The memory,
The pain of a forgotten thing,
Me...
You can't remember,
But I do,
Always and forever,
I'll be there for you...

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