by basil! » Mon Oct 23, 2017 3:15 am
Oh boy, I have quiet a few.
First of all, Firestar. I mean, why does he have to be such a mary sue?
Also Onestar. He was so kind as Onewhisker and I loved him, and then he became leader and BAM! Friendship ended forever!
Also what is Dovewing doing???? Just choose a mate, for Starclan's sake! Like someone (I think Bluestar) said, you can't live with one paw in each world!
And I know people will be mad at me for this, but why does anyone like Ashfur? HE TRIED TO KILL HIS LOVE'S KITS (and the best cat ever Jayfeather). If you think that's true love, I believe you're wrong. If you love someone you wouldn't want to hurt them for personal gain!
AND WHAT ABOUT MILLIE? SHE ABANDONED AND ABUSED POOR BLOSSOMFALL FOR BRIARLIGHT! Like, why would you do that? It's hard enough on Blossomfall already, with her sister injured like that.
And speaking of Blossomfall, after her warrior ceremony she was referred to as "Blossompaw" once. Things like these really bother me, although I know the authors and editors try their best.
And how can Mothwing not believe in Starclan when she's a medicine cat and saw them herself? She's quite magical in the fact of how ignorant she can be.
(I ship Jay X Moth who's with me? Although Jay X Briar is nice too)
*Deep breath in* I think that's it...
Edit: I just thought of a few more...
The fact that the cats lost their powers after the battle. I feel like that's just annoying and frustrating.
Leafpool. Must I say more?
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basil l they/he
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