[❂] as we walk in fields of gold - ValleyClan - OPEN!

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[❂] as we walk in fields of gold - ValleyClan - OPEN!

Postby AtlasHyperion » Fri Nov 03, 2017 7:53 am

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𝚅𝚊𝚕𝚕𝚎𝚢𝙲𝚕𝚊𝚗
(discussion thread)
Important notice! DO NOT make a leader or medicine cat yet! Talk to me if
you are interested in having such a role in the future.

We've existed for as long as we can remember; though, in retrospect, that
might not be very long.

Wandering through this valley of ours, we've been here for many moons.
Perhaps we are too quick to call it forever. Perhaps our leader is too quick
to accept outsiders, or perhaps we are too slow to accept them.

Perhaps that is why we are so divided, why even our apprentices are so
fast to judge each other over a name or a mother or a past.

You see, our previous leader, Goldenstar, thought that our archaic rules
about who a Clan cat was were a little too outdated. She proclaimed that
she would allow any cat into the Clan who desired to uphold the Valley
Code and place the Clan before everything, even his or her own life. If
even the most troublesome of Clanborn cats could learn this, then so could
a curious passing loner, or a kittypet that loved the wild.

But now the loving mother to us all Goldenstar is in the Fields of Silver, and
no leader could ever hope to keep us united as well as she could. Now we
are divided amongst ourselves by name and by blood, even as we are a little
too ignorant to notice troubles arising in the Golden Valley.

After all, what's in a name?


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[❂] plot

Postby AtlasHyperion » Fri Nov 03, 2017 8:12 am

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A small but still strong Clan lives in the Golden Valley, proclaiming
themselves to be ValleyClan. They are not like the four Clans that
you might be familiar with.

They have ancestors, yes, but instead of Silverpelt, they have the
Fields of Silver, also referred to as the Field of Stars.

Their version of the Warrior Code is the Valley Code, and does not
apply only to the Clan. It is the unspoken set of laws that govern
any member of the feral population that passes through the valley.

ValleyClan also has a Clan Code, which dictates what Clan members
can and cannot do. It is also different from the Warrior Code.

The main conflict in the Clan is about inviting outsiders in, though
trouble brews elsewhere in the valley with the threat of the Furless
(ValleyClan's word for humans) encroaching on the Golden Valley
and feral populations coming from elsewhere to cause trouble for
the valley cats, and not just of the Clan.

Much of this internal conflict involves naming ceremonies, because
many cats of outsider origin choose to keep their names, or at least
part of them. Loners, rogues, barn cats, and kittypets who kept a
part of their name (i.e. Smokey -> Smokefur) are stuck in the middle
of the argument, and the tension over names has torn apart many a
friendship, and is dividing the Clan in a time when they need to be
united.


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[❂] codes

Postby AtlasHyperion » Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:02 am

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(a set of rules pertaining to every cat who enters the Golden Valley)

1) A cat may not kill another cat unless the act was a necessary one of self-defense.

2) A cat may not mislead another cat if the other asks for directions. The valley is no
place for trickery.

3) A cat may not deny another cat a share of his or her prey if the other is pregnant,
nursing kits, a kit him/herself, sick, injured, elderly, or otherwise vulnerable.

4) A cat must do everything possible to save the life of a pregnant or nursing cat, her
kits, or any kits that he or she may find.

5) A cat who harms a pregnant or nursing cat, a kit, a sick cat, an injured cat, an old
cat, or kills a cat without reasonable cause will be exiled forever from the valley.

6) A cat may not steal prey or pick fights with another cat. Again, the valley is no
place for fooling about.

7) A cat may not decline to help another cat in imminent danger. The cat is only exempt
from this rule if helping would be impossible, like an elderly cat who sees dogs chasing
another cat across a river that would be too dangerous to cross.

8) A cat may not decline to take in and help a pregnant cat, a nursing cat, a kit, a sick
cat, an injured cat, or an elderly cat, unless that cat believes that another cat would be
better suited to helping. If so, the cat must help them as much as possible in getting to
the cat who can help.


𝙲𝚕𝚊𝚗 𝙲𝚘𝚍𝚎
(a code to be upheld by any member of ValleyClan)

1) Defend the Clan before the rest of the valley, but never forget the importance of
every single cat who passes through the land.

2) Elders, queens, kits, sick cats, and injured cats must be fed before apprentices and
warriors. An apprentice may not eat until their mentor allows them to.

3) Prey is killed only to be eaten, and must be brought back to camp. A cat may not eat
anything that he or she has caught until it has been placed upon the prey pile and all
cats who eat before that cat have been fed.

4) A kit's eyes must have changed before he or she can become an apprentice. If a kit
is at or past the apprenticing age, five moons, and his or her eyes are still blue, he or
she may become an apprentice, as it is likely that this cat will always have blue eyes.
(Note: some examples of this are Goldenstar and the first leader, Goldenvalley, after
whom the Clan was named.)

5) Newly appointed warriors will keep a silent vigil. They may only awaken the Clan if
they suspect danger. They are expected to call out "who's there?" if they hear any noise
that sounds suspicious.

6) A cat cannot become leader without meeting three conditions: he or she is a senior
warrior, he or she has mentored at least one apprentice, and he or she has had or has
helped to raise kits. (Note: this last condition was added a couple generations before
Goldenstar, by a leader who stepped down because he did not believe he could be a
father to his Clan before he had been a father to kits. In respect to his sister, who was
barren, he added that the cat did not need to have borne kits him or her self.)

7) When a leader is appointed, he or she must decide by moonrise who will be leader
after he or she dies, retires, or is exiled. If he or she desires to change their choice, he
or she must not do so lightly, and must do so before the entire Clan, and must warn the
first choice and the new choice well before the announcement.

8) If a cat does not wish to be the leader's choice to take over the Clan when the leader
is gone, he or she must state this to the leader before the announcement. If he or she
decides after being chosen, he or she must confer with the leader and receive his or her
approval to be removed from the position.

9) After the death, retirement, or exile of a leader, the new leader must take his or her
place by moonrise. He or she is not required to take on the suffix "star" if he or she does
not want to. (Note: this last bit was added when Goldenstar's predecessor, Skipper, said:
"Would any cat here say that I am not fit to be the leader of ValleyClan? I am as old and
revered as your elders, and you do not fuss over their names. If Redstar believed that I
could become a senior warrior without changing my name, then surely you would not say
that I am unfit to be your leader if I want to be Skipper still. It is a name of the valley,
and we must not forget that we are all cats of the valley." Granted, this didn't ease the
tension all that much.)

10) No cat may be denied aid from the Clan, and the Clan shall never turn away a queen
who wishes that we preserve her legacy through her kits by making them members of
ValleyClan. No cat may be denied entry from the Clan, and no cat shall be forced to stay
if he or she does not wish to. (This one was added for a good loner friend of Redstar (as
mentioned above), who believed firmly that a Clanmate is a Clanmate, no matter if his
or her blood smells of wheat or Furless. His friend, May, knew that her kits would be taken
away by her Furless owners, and wished for Redstar to take care of them so that she could
know if any of them had their father's eyes.)

11) The word of the Clan leader is the Clan Code. If a cat believes the leader's actions to
be unjust or incorrect, he or she must converse with the Clan leader. If a leader is believed
to be cruel or unfit to lead the Clan, a cat may challenge him or her, to which the leader
must either reply with stepping down or engaging in trial by combat.

12) The safety of the Clan and, by extension, the valley, is more important than the safety
of any one cat.

13) ValleyClan must always remember that they are part of the Golden Valley, not all of it,
and that any cat who has passed on is permitted to walk in the Field of Stars, regardless of
whether or not that cat is from the Clan.


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[❂] rules

Postby AtlasHyperion » Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:20 am

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1) Tess's rules have to be followed everywhere on the site. How's
about we follow my rules, too?

2) Try not to make too many cats with blue eyes, as it's supposed to
be rather uncommon for ValleyClan cats.

3) No god-modding, powerplaying, Mary Sues, etc. Always remember
the limits of real life.

4) Always ask if you want to injure or kill another character. It's not
fun to suddenly have one of your characters die with no warning.

5) OOC comments and questions may be included in the top or bottom
of roleplay posts, but general chatter (i.e. exceeds a small paragraph
in length) should go on the discussion thread.

6) No, you cannot reserve characters. Also, please do not post on the
discussion thread without at least a partially-completed form.

7) On the note of forms, you must include a picture and any names that
your character intends to have. It's the main source of conflict.

8) You can have as many characters as you can control, but only one high-
rank cat (leader/medicine cat/senior warrior).

9) Your characters may not have kits together, unless your character is one
of the parents and the other is mentioned as having died or otherwise been
removed from the picture before the rp begins.

10) Disable large signatures on the main thread, and post everything but
rp posts on the discussion thread.

11) Keep names and appearances plausible. (Again, few to no characters
with blue eyes.)

12) I'm not going to nitpick about activity and post length, but try at least
a small paragraph per character and don't disappear without warning. (A
small paragraph is around 5-6 small or normal sized font.)

(some helpful links: medicine cat herbs, clan ceremonies)
(keep in mind that ValleyClan terminology is not the same as 4-Clan terminology)
(and here's the Golden Valley)


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Re: [❂] characters

Postby AtlasHyperion » Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:26 am

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(please post on the discussion thread if you would like to be successor - I will decide)

leader
Ashstar - female - 120 moons - Tankie
(apprentice?)

medicine cat
Thicketwind - male - 30 moons - sign of the times
(apprentice: Aprilpaw - female - 16 moons - Tankie)

successor
name - gender - age - user
(apprentice?)

senior warriors
Nazareth - male - 72 moons - Tankie
Crookedbreath - male - 67 moons - my dear laurens;

warriors
Dovewind - female - 42 moons - crash the mode
Sootface - male - 42 moons - crash the mode
Ebonymask - female - 40 moons - KittyCutePaws
Cloudwhisker - male - 40 moons - KittyCutePaws
Morningmask - female - 22 moons - my dear laurens;
Owlfang - male - 28 moons - Iduna

apprentices
Huck - male - 13 moons - mentor? - crash the mode
Dawnpaw - female - 11 moons - mentor: Dovewind - Iduna

queens
Poppysong - female - 50 moons - Iduna

kits

elders
Whiskey - male - 96 moons - Tankie

loners
Eden - female - 19 moons - sign of the times
Hemlock - female - 33 moons - my dear laurens;
Asphodel - 26 moons - male - my dear laurens;

barn cats
Fog - female - 44 moons - Iduna

kittypets


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[❂] similarities & differences to the 4 clans

Postby AtlasHyperion » Fri Nov 03, 2017 3:03 pm

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𝚃𝚎𝚛𝚖𝚒𝚗𝚘𝚕𝚘𝚐𝚢 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚂𝚕𝚊𝚗𝚐

When Addressing Cats:

kit = kit, kitten, baby, lil'un
apprentice = apprentice
she-cat = queen, molly, lady, she-cat
tom = tom, tomcat
mother = mother, mum, mom, mama, ma
father = father, dad, papa, pa, da, daddy
friend = friend, bud, buddy, huntmate

When Referring to Places:

Silverpelt (cat heaven) = Field of Silver, Field of Stars
Dark Forest (cat hell) = the Starless
camp = home
fresh-kill pile = prey pile

And Other Words for Things:

Twoleg = Furless, skins
Twolegplace = Thunderhome
monsters (cars) = thunderers
kittypet = house cat
barn cat = barn cat
mouse-brain (a common warrior insult) = vulture
loners (that live permanently in the valley) = loners, valley cats
loners (that travel through) = loners, mountain cats
eclipse = Sun Stealer/Moon Stealer


𝙿𝚛𝚎𝚢, 𝙿𝚛𝚎𝚍𝚊𝚝𝚘𝚛𝚜, 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚁𝚊𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚢

Prey

rabbits - common
hares - common
mice - common
field voles - common
fish - common
pine martens - uncommon
small birds - uncommon
polecats - rare

Neutral Animals

deer - common
elk - common
horses - common
ponies - common
ravens & crows - common
moths - common
beetles - common
small insects - common
butterflies - common
cows - common
sheep - common
spiders (non-toxic) uncommon
lizards - uncommon
chickens - uncommon
pigs - uncommon
spiders (poisonous) - rare
bees - rare
moose - rare

Predators

hawks - common
falcons - common
foxes - common
eagles - uncommon
owls - uncommon
coyotes - uncommon
vultures - uncommon
wolves - rare
bears - very rare
mountain lions - extremely rare


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[❂] locations

Postby AtlasHyperion » Sun Nov 05, 2017 1:24 am

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camp 1 [removed]
the camp is on a small hill overlooking the flat ground
dens are situated throughout the rock formations atop the hill

meeting rock 1
the Clan meets here, with the leader at the top of the pile, for Clan meetings

Golden Fields 1 [removed]
the fields are named after the yellowy-gold color of the wild wheat and barley
the grass is very tall, such that cats must sit or stand to see above it

Golden Valley 1 [removed]
mountains rise from either side of the wide flat land in the valley
aspen trees nearer to the mountains enforce the name "golden"

the river 1
the river is very shallow, and many cats learn to swim before they learn to hunt
in times of drought, the cats travel upstream to where the water is deeper

aspen forest 1[removed]
the cats don't often travel to the forest, because it's a good day's journey away
the Clan goes here in times of drought, as well as many other valley cats

summer camp 1 [removed]
the summer camp is where the cats go in the hot, dry weather where the river is deeper
the tiny island is a short swim, around eight feet, across the smooth water
the river here, and running through the aspen forest, is about five feet deep

valley in winter 1 [removed]
ValleyClan considers winter a sacred time of year
they feel close to their ancestors because the Golden Fields reflect the Field of Stars


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[❂] res

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Postby AtlasHyperion » Sun Nov 12, 2017 9:51 am

TIME: early morning, with some stars still in the sky
WEATHER: a little chilly, overcast, slight breeze from the north that smells of winter


Ashstar
Ashstar - female - 120 moons - leader - location: leader's den -> meeting rock - tags: open
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    It had been almost twelve moons, almost a year, since she became leader. So long since Goldenstar faded away in her sleep that night, but still she wasn't sure that she could take care of her Clan without the golden tabby's guidance. She padded out of her den, feeling the cold breeze ruffle her thick, soft fur. It stung briefly against the edges of her burn scar, but quickly subsided. The small calico lifted her head to face the sky, eyes flickering shut. She sent a silent prayer to Goldenstar, willing, however in vain, for the Field of Stars to call back with an answer. It's been so long since you left. You were a mother to all of us, and I can't bring myself to play with a kit. How can I hope to be half the leader you were if I'm nothing like you? The world was silent but for the whistle of the cool wind across the fields of wild wheat. She sighed, her one green eye opening again as she turned her gaze to the camp.

Aprilpaw
Aprilpaw - female - 16 moons - med. cat apprentice - location: med. cat den - tags: Thicketwind?
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    Aprilpaw blinked her eyes open quite suddenly, though it might have been hard to notice for anyone watching, as her eyes were as gray as her light tabby pelt. She noticed the cold wind of the fall morning drifting through the air to the medicine den, however sheltered it was in a small gap in the white and gray rocks of the camp. Her eyes, though her mind was unwilling, drifted out to the mountains, visible from the entrance of the den, where she could see the first hints of snow. She tried to fight the prick of excitement, the unbidden deluge of sorrow. Winter did not bring Winter. There was a tiny tinkle from her collar, but the hard bit dangling from it rarely made a sound unless she was shaking her fur out, so she ignored the sound. She sniffed absentmindedly at a shriveled brown leaf that had fluttered into the den, ears perked to detect noise. She trotted out of the den to see who was up, but didn't see Thicketwind outside, so she padded back inside. "Thicketwind?" Aprilpaw called into the silence.

Nazareth
Nazareth - male - 72 moons - senior warrior - location: warriors' den -> river - tags: open
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    Nazareth snorted awake in the least graceful way possible, spitting out a leaf that had drifted into his open mouth as he snored in his sleep. Careful not to awaken any of the other warriors, he weaved his way through the clumps of moss and feathers that served as nests, sniffing the wintery breeze as he wandered away from the camp, down the hill towards the shallow, wide river. He lapped at the edge of the water, the cold surprising him. It was going to be a freezing winter this year. He glanced up to the mountains, where the ever-present white snow atop them seemed to be creeping down towards the valley. With a sigh, he watched the last stars begin to fade from the sky. It had been so long since he'd watched his mother dig a grave for his newborn sister, since he'd heard her name for the first time. Rosie. Her fur was creamy pearl, almost pink. He remembered that a rosebush had started growing over her before the moon had finished, and had grown into a sprawling bush before another had passed. It was as if Rosie's spirit was protecting such a fragile little body from the world, apologizing for not being able to do it before. Apologizing for not being able to cure her cough, not watching her close enough through her first and only night. He liked to believe that the last star to fade, always the brightest in the night sky, was Rosie's star. He liked to believe that she would fight off even the sun to protect every kitten under the vast silvery field. He kept watching, even after she'd faded from the sky.

Whiskey
Whiskey - male - 96 moons - elder - location: elder's den - tags: open
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    Whiskey... was still asleep, dreaming of eating a rabbit bigger than the meeting rock. He was old and tired and it was too cold and dreary to be awake. Do you blame him, really?
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