“I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

[SingSangJisung]

Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
EDIT! Part two is Up this i where i was looking for help!if you have any ideo you want or anything that might be confused i need help!

[SingSangJisung]

Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
EDIT! Part two is Up this i where i was looking for help!if you have any ideo you want or anything that might be confused i need help!

[SingSangJisung]

Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
EDIT! Part two is Up this i where i was looking for help!if you have any ideo you want or anything that might be confused i need help!

[SingSangJisung]

Working on chapter 3! ♥️

[SingSangJisung]

Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
EDIT! Part two is Up this i where i was looking for help!if you have any ideo you want or anything that might be confused i need help!
Update!:
I’m planning on making every chapter around 12 pages in the wattpad format, so look forward to that! I just wrote have of chapter three tonight and will finish the rest tomorrow! (And maybe four as well!) I still and looking for any criticism or votes as that would greatly help me! And encourage me to keep writing!

[SingSangJisung]

Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
EDIT! Part two is Up this i where i was looking for help!if you have any ideo you want or anything that might be confused i need help!
Update!:
I’m planning on making every chapter around 12 pages in the wattpad format, so look forward to that! I just wrote have of chapter three tonight and will finish the rest tomorrow! (And maybe four as well!) I still and looking for any criticism or votes as that would greatly help me! And encourage me to keep writing!

[SingSangJisung]

I noticed people aren’t reading my two newest chapters! And it saddens my heart to know that! Please let me know why you think people won’t want to keep reading! This book is so important to my so it’s really sad when I see people not interested, it can be discouraging so please comment vote and tell me how I can improve! It would help so much!

[SingSangJisung]

THANK YU ALL FOR 50 Reads! I thought I would get like ten! This is super big for me because it means people might be interested! You are all so awesome! I really hope you keep reading please vote! And yet getting one read I was so excited!! So this is such a huge accomplishment! You are amazing! ♥️
Now we need ten votes!! You are awesome so I know it worst take long!

[SingSangJisung]

Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
EDIT! Part two is Up this i where i was looking for help!if you have any ideo you want or anything that might be confused i need help!
Update!:
I’m planning on making every chapter around 12 pages in the wattpad format, so look forward to that! I just wrote have of chapter three tonight and will finish the rest tomorrow! (And maybe four as well!) I still and looking for any criticism or votes as that would greatly help me! And encourage me to keep writing!

[Wikkedphobias]

mark so I can read