“I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

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What should the next chapter Be about??

The grocery store
3
33%
Romance 😉😉
1
11%
Meeting Carson(also breaking up with Carson)
4
44%
Being weird (playing video games or something)
1
11%
Pm me other ideas!
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Re: “I Think I Fell” need criticism!!(updated story)

Postby SingSangJisung » Tue Dec 12, 2017 12:38 am

Thank you! I really hope you enjoy! Can you tell me what you thought? I would love to here about it!
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Re: “I Think I Fell” need criticism!!(updated story)

Postby SingSangJisung » Tue Dec 12, 2017 8:44 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was deserted so I created a fresh one!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/wBecZo1DqI
EDIT! Part two is Up this i where i was looking for help!if you have any ideo you want or anything that might be confused i need help!
Update!:
I’m planning on making every chapter around 12 pages in the wattpad format, so look forward to that! I just wrote have of chapter three tonight and will finish the rest tomorrow! (And maybe four as well!) I still and looking for any criticism or votes as that would greatly help me! And encourage me to keep writing!
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Re: “I Think I Fell” need criticism!!(updated story)

Postby SingSangJisung » Tue Dec 12, 2017 11:12 am

I'm working on Chapter 4 right now! it's going to spend some time Developing the characters. get ready to learn some backstory! it might also have a plot twist!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Creating an update schedule!)

Postby SingSangJisung » Wed Dec 13, 2017 12:48 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


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Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Creating an update schedule!)

Postby SingSangJisung » Thu Dec 14, 2017 5:31 am

Bump! I got sick! I plan on posting before Friday!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Thu Dec 14, 2017 11:25 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


Image
Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Fri Dec 15, 2017 3:58 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


Image
Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Sat Dec 16, 2017 9:04 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


Image
Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Sun Dec 17, 2017 10:14 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


Image
Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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Re: “I Think I Fell”(Need Critism)

Postby SingSangJisung » Mon Dec 18, 2017 11:53 am

XxEchoTheCatxX wrote:
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Have you ever wondered what happened when you
find out your family has arranged you to marry someone you don't know, or
better yet someone you know but hate? Now imagine something happened
one day where you realized you don't hate just the complete opposite.
That is me and Kai... and I think I fell for him.


Image
Hi! I have plans I write a small book but I need some help so far I have
had trouble getting people so my work! So I want to do an interest check
to see if this idea would stick! I had a different wattpad before but it was
deserted so I created a fresh one!
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