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Re: My Poetry.

Postby Where is Mars Argo? » Thu Nov 16, 2017 1:03 pm

A heart that's breaking
and criminally teased.
I keep mistaking
your kind politesse
for platonic caring.
If I'm wrong
please, I've got to know!
Tell me, I'll be gone.
I'll go, I will go.
I'll fly away.
Far, far away
To Europe.

BE GONE
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Re: My Poetry.

Postby Where is Mars Argo? » Thu Nov 16, 2017 1:11 pm

Stained with disease, besmirched
Smeared with dirt
My crystalline skin
Of sugar and cinnamon
That would splendour in the glow
Yet, it's unclean, impotent to show
Due to vexed concede

To moon out the window
he's waiting for a show

He know I'm here
And his moonlight does bleed
Through the window
A withheld solace in it's glow
That transcend my transparency
In complete disregard of me

The moon, he's out in the rain
He's approaching amain
Couldn't find me in the stars
Come find me up the stairs
Gift be presence
And vitality heavensent
Yet instead he smashed my heart to finders
Sifted through the cinders
Afterall, the reaper does tend
Whatever I mend

I'll try again tomorrow.

I'M ONLY INVISIBLE WHEN IT'S CONVENIENT
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Re: My Poetry.

Postby Where is Mars Argo? » Thu Nov 16, 2017 1:17 pm

I'll dress up all pretty
Gown of pure white
Adorned in pity
Angel of light
With a dark surprise
And hate in her eyes

I'll count down the days
tainted by tears
I'll burn your special day
And your peers
To the ground
And bless the sound

Dance through the flames
Tuned twist and twirl
Stripped down to lingerie
The castaway girl
With burning skin
And body frail and thin

BURN
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Re: My Poetry.

Postby Where is Mars Argo? » Thu Nov 16, 2017 1:21 pm

Be hopeful rather than expectant
Understanding rather than disappointed
Grateful in place of heedless
And attentive instead of disjointed
Always remember there's a silver lining
and smooth sailing someday

FRIENDLY REMINDER
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Re: My Poetry.

Postby Where is Mars Argo? » Thu Nov 16, 2017 1:28 pm

While it's admittedly true
In some regards I'll never change
I'm not the same person
I was when I woke up today
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Re: My Poetry.

Postby byte » Thu Nov 16, 2017 1:29 pm

From a fellow poet, I say that this is absolutely wonderful! You show promise. I have no doubt that you'll go on to create fantastical things.
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Re: My Poetry.

Postby Where is Mars Argo? » Thu Nov 16, 2017 1:35 pm

Hohlnacht wrote:From a fellow poet, I say that this is absolutely wonderful! You show promise. I have no doubt that you'll go on to create fantastical things.

Thank you kindly! That means a lot to me.
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Re: My Poetry.

Postby Where is Mars Argo? » Thu Nov 16, 2017 1:52 pm

I know, you're hard done by
When you're not in control of my life
And suddenly, oh my!
I'm having a grand ol' time!
How dare I!
Right?

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Re: My Poetry.

Postby Where is Mars Argo? » Thu Nov 16, 2017 1:56 pm

I just want somebody
To talk with
To walk with
To silently stalk with
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Re: My Poetry.

Postby Where is Mars Argo? » Thu Nov 16, 2017 3:56 pm

Lies are daggers
You plunge into your own soul

❤ TWIST & TURN ❤

Leave an unfillable hole
Without much regard for the words
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