Journey for the Lost

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Re: Journey for the Lost

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Nov 29, 2017 11:24 am

DeMaizu wrote:I think what I really liked about this was the friendship between Veil and Kaia; it was cool! The wording threw be off a bit; probably because I'm not used to it more than anything else. The phrasings and (like BeefyFish said) "oldtimey" way that the characters spoke, I mean; it made sense, it just took me a second or so to go "oh, that's the equivalent of such-and-such." Really cool!
Thank you so much! My sweet babies, they are such an awesome team :D <3
Ahh, okay; thanks for letting me know! :.D Maybe the confusion means I used archaic language correctly XD I doubt it XD
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Re: Journey for the Lost

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Apr 18, 2018 10:36 pm

bloop~ c:
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