Find a piece of writing from when you were very young and post it. Do not edit out any grammar mistakes.
I remember the day that I saw you talking to another girl. I ignored it because I'm not that type of person. Then the next day came, and you totally ignored me. I wondered for a few minutes why, but forgot about it, later that day I saw you again with her. I said whatever, but days carried into weeks, and I got worried that he was cheating. I walked up to him and said hi. I said it again but you still ignored me. I waved my hand in your face and yelled your name so many times. Finally I got so mad I went to slap you across your face, until I heard what you said... "I can't belive that she's really gone, Cinear. How could I do this to her! I killed her, I froze while she was lying there! Dieing! Oh, how could I let this happen?" he started crying. I looked at both of them confused on who he was talking about. I went to go put my hand on his shoulder, but when I did, it went right through him. I gasped and tried to hold his hand but it didn't work.
"Jake, Cinear! Can on of you hear me?!" No one moved, they just sat there until Jake spoke,
"How could I let this happen? It's all my fault."
"What do you mean? It was an accident, right Jake?"
"It was but then it wasn't, I set the whole thing up. I sented someone to scare her but I didn't know that it was going to go this far. When - when I went to go see how it went, I saw her! Laying on the ground, dieing!" He started busting out crying, "She was screaming at me to help her, but I just couldn't..." He put his head in his palms. I got so angry at him I don't know what I was doing until a big rock came and hit him in the head. He landed with a thud onto the ground and I screamed. All of a sudden there was a gust of wind and I turned my head to the side, and there he was, standing right next to me. I gasped and hugged him, he hugged me back and we both started crying. I then pushed him backwards and gave him the death stare, I just shouk my head at him and turned around and sat down, looking at his dead body on the floor. He came over to me and sat down.
"Luna, babe I'm so sorry on what happened to you. I didn't know that it would have gone that far." He went to go hold my hand, but I pulled away.
"No Jake, now we are even. You killed me, and I killed you. There is nothing left now." I sat for a minute more then stood up and walked further down the street, I thought about everything that happened. If I should forgive him or not until I came to the place we first ment. I walked inside and to the room, I opened the foor and looked at the white board and the desk. I went over to it and sat down. Then came in Jake, standing infront of the closed door.
"Remember this? The first day of 7th grade. You were sitting down there talking to our friends, when I walked in you stopped and looked at me. I know, that you know it was the first time of love." He laughed, and came over to me. I got up and hugged him tightly. Then he pulled me outside to the park, he set me in a certain spot, and he got on one knee. I gasped and looked at him in shock.
"Luna, I promised before we died I would ask you to marry me. But, now that we're both dead, I can still full fill that promise. So, I ask off you. Luna, will you marry me?"
He got a ring, and held it up to me.
"Oh, Jake... of course I'll marry you!" He got up and hugged me. We stayed hugging until this bright light appears, then coming out of the light were two people. When we finally saw who they were, we started to cry. I ran up to him and whispered, "Grandpa, I've missed you so much." I hugged him harder, then saw Jake with someone I haven't ment before.
"Luna, this is my mother, Bella."
"And this is my grand-father, Ruben." I smiled while hugging him. Then they both moved away from us and looked at us. We were confused on what they were doing until my grandfather spoke,
"Luna and Jake you have just died from a tragic death. You both have died far to young of the age 24 years old."
"You have a choice," his mother put in, "you both can live your lives as ghost but may not get married, and not be in this world. Or you can be humans again, but you may not see your family and friends ever again, also you have to go to a different place to live in." His mother said, and stepped back. We both looked at each other, not knowing what we should do.
"How long until we have to chose?"
"You guys have up to two hours, then it will be time to chose. We will always be watching you if you guys chose to be humans, and will only be able to see us in your dreams." Bella said.
He looked uncertain about this, I knew he was waiting for me to make the
And that's it. I wrote this in 8th grade..... 4 years ago, ack. xD
I didn't even finish the sentence.
