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OMGOSH I LOVE YOUR BRAIN (...does that sound weird?)
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John 3 : 16

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Jan 04, 2017 6:25 pm

For God so loved the world
that he gave his one and only son
that whoever believes in him shall not perish
but have
eternal
life


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Postby Ranger of the North » Thu Jan 19, 2017 9:14 am

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Postby Ranger of the North » Sat Feb 04, 2017 8:19 pm

I'm not white. I'm pakeha.
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Postby Ranger of the North » Sat Feb 04, 2017 8:23 pm

grief is love with its darker clothes on.
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Musings

Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Feb 05, 2017 9:58 am

Sometimes
early in the morning
when I'm the only one awake
I think I'm stepping loudly.

But then
when my brother gets up
I realise:
I'm not.
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Ideas

Postby Ranger of the North » Wed Mar 01, 2017 3:41 pm

Please don't use these yet c:
Meh. On second thoughts, whatever XD but still




  1. make the reader understand the character is deaf/blind/mute/etc. without saying anything about it. Description only
  2. Get across that the character is sad/happy/angry/etc. without saying outright. Changing how they view the world/colours/etc. only
  3. Short-story without describing the main-character. If done right, by the time it's finished readers should know
  4. Describe without describing. Ex: 'painting' a sunset without saying it's a sunset
wip. more to be added later.
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Postby Ranger of the North » Wed May 10, 2017 9:40 pm

“Pride can be useful in this game we call life.
“It was pride (or wisdom?) that forbade me from giving-in to their bullying —
even when I didn't recognise it as such.”

“No, kid. That was God.”
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contemplation

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Jul 14, 2017 7:22 pm

Out of the pain
came something beautiful
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This isn't the end

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Sep 22, 2017 2:14 pm

xxxxxAn eight year old girl had a panic attack, 'cause the father she loved left and never looked back. No longer the hero she counted on, he told her he loved her, and then he was gone.
xxxxxShe tried to look happy in front of her friends, but knew that she'd never feel normal again. She fought back the tears as they filled her eyes, and wanted him back just to tell him goodbye.

    When the rain falls down —
    when it all turns around —
    when the light goes out —
    this isn't the end.
xxxxxHer dad was a good guy that everyone liked, but nobody knew he was dying inside. He promised his family he'd be alright, and then with a gunshot he left them behind

    When the rain falls down —
    when it all turns around —
    when the light goes out —
    this isn't the end.
    When the rain falls down —
    when it all turns around —
    when the light goes out —
    this isn't the end, no.
xxxxxThe role of a father he never deserved — he abandoned his daughter and never returned.
xxxxxAnd over the years, though the pain was real, she finally forgave him and started to heal.
xxxxxHow close is the ending? Well, nobody knows; the future's a mystery, and anything goes. Love is confusing, and life is hard. You fight to survive 'cause you made it this far.

    It's all too astounding to comprehend.
    It's just the beginning, this isn't the end —
    it's just the beginning, this isn't the end...

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