royalty. wrote:
i don't know if i'm using this right.... please tell me if i'm not.
i need help with a plot for a wolf story, as well as how i could possibly keep roleplay posts long. any tips? for the story, it's based off of dark and bloodthirsty wolves in war against wolves of peace.
c:That stone is pretty, he thought.
Often confuses me, as that's how I type speech cx"That stone is pretty," he thought.
as just italics can sometimes get confusing, but so far I haven't been bothered XD'That stone is pretty,' he thought.
TheSongOfTheStars wrote:I would write a description of the stone, since I try to avoid putting thoughts down directly like dialogue. Something like.
He eyed the stone, it's pulsating beauty drawing his gaze in. The deep green of the smooth cut sides seeming to glow, even in the sunlight.
See how that's more descriptive than "That's a pretty stone," he thought.
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