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'tis a little corner for me...

Postby nua, » Sat Jan 04, 2014 10:44 am

        ... and my naïve imagination.


        hullo there, if you're reading, and welcome!
        i placed this thread here carefully, thinking of all the stories that must be going around cs, so that my thread would pass unnoticed, instead of having it on as, where these are fewer.
        because i want to protect my nice personal stories.
        but if you've anything to say, you can do so through pm, and no, i don't mind the occassional post. c:
        i hope you'll like the reading, and no, do you not distress because you may not understand some of the things i write, they simply come from here, my heart, and my naïve imagination.


        desdémona.
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Re: 'tis a little corner for me...

Postby Arachnomania » Sat Jan 04, 2014 10:45 am

I'm just gonna leave this post so I don't lose this thread. I would really like to read some of your stories.
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--forever.

Postby nua, » Sat Jan 04, 2014 10:52 am

        well, where were we going? i can't remember, or else i never knew. the old car seemed like it moved at a fast rate, but if you stopped to look around you, it had only moved a few metres. she sat to my right. she had a pen in her hand. she took my hand and hers, and she wrote in both; "you and me," and she read it aloud as she wrote... "best friends..." I repeated anxiously, "...best friends...", and she wrote the final word. "forever.", she said. "...forever...", i said in a hush, amazed. her tone had bore no feeling at all, she had spoken dragging the words monotonously, and so she turned to watch ahead of her. but i, my eyes were almost in tears, though they had not gone not even slightly wetter. my heart, yes it beat fast, fast, fast. friends again! how could that be? best friends once more? i didn't even think about the boyfriend that had set us apart. no. he didn't exist. didn't cross my mind once.
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--mendoza.

Postby nua, » Sat Jan 04, 2014 11:04 am

        the painting stood in front of us. in front of everyone, actually. august had painted it. it was not time yet to admire him or his skills; not ever, in fact. so this was it. mendoza. i went through the painting and actually been inside there, in the actual mendoza. i've been there a long time. then i went back. august awaited for me. it just made sense that he was leaving his living painting behind him before he went. to mendoza, of course. he would miss me. "i remember", he started saying, "i remember when my brother brought his girlfriends home. he would kiss them in front of me. like this." before i knew it, i was of course in his arms and being kissed. "august", i mumbled. i felt annoyed. now he was taking me in his arms, before he left. "august", i repeated. i felt anguished. if he had only shown his feelings before... "august", i begged. i felt pleased. he kissed me, he liked me, just like i liked him. "august", i whispered urgently. i felt awkward. our friends were watching. just that. watching. not uttering a word, not making a sound, not moving an inch. as if they were our own special cardboard friends. august let go of me. that was just it. we would miss each other.
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--'tis puzzling me.

Postby nua, » Sun Jan 05, 2014 7:42 am

        a broken heart is truly like a puzzle.
        beyond that it is difficult to understand;
        literally, 'tis a puzzle.
        'tis like a puzzle you've built once before.
        or else, you have the image in the box to guide you.
        but you have all the pieces before you, and you don't understand
        how on earth they could've been together sometime.
        you really don't feel like getting to work on it,
        maybe you should just keep it that way and set your mind to other things.
        but it's no use, some day you will have to get it done.
        awfully painful job. hard to do, too.
        the worst part of it all is when you find you have missing pieces.
        you'll never find them again, of course,
        and the puzzle will never be once more complete.
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--jp is another queer puzzle indeed.

Postby nua, » Thu Mar 06, 2014 10:44 am

        i'm not yours, but i'm yours.
        you're not mine, but you're mine.

        we are not for each other.
        no, we're not for each other.
        but we're for each other.
        certainly i'm here for you.
        but i will not always be.
        you're not here for me.
        not as i wish you would.
        but i hope you could.
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...coming back.

Postby nua, » Mon Aug 28, 2017 10:59 am

        ... at a time when i'm perhaps my old self's own polar opposite
        as i never thought i would be.

        but in a way i'm the same foolish girl.
        i've anchored my heart yet again.
        i feel this ship will not sink.
        not unsatisfactorily at least.
        but again i'm holding on to earthly things.
        earthly beings.

        i'm coming back at a time when i'm perhaps my old self's own exact reflection in the mirror
        as i never thought i would be.
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...girl.

Postby nua, » Thu Sep 28, 2017 12:30 pm

        often it hurt to live
        i needed my girl
        she was so naïve

        in another world
        her hair straight
        mine in curl

        i could not wait
        but i did believe
        this was fate
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...joaquín.

Postby nua, » Thu Sep 28, 2017 12:31 pm

        just you alone
        owns my heart
        and it's
        quite
        unique
        i have known
        nothing better.
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...hoy.

Postby nua, » Thu Oct 05, 2017 5:13 am

        otra vez me despierto
        justo ahora que
        el agua
        en mis ojos

        otra vez el agua en mis ojos, justo ahora que me despierto
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