~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

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What should book 3 be called?

Poll ended at Wed Dec 19, 2012 11:22 am

New World
2
22%
This isn't Earth
1
11%
Not my Planet
1
11%
Angels From the Other World
1
11%
Deadly Earth
1
11%
Mystery Stage
0
No votes
Remember Me
3
33%
 
Total votes : 9

Re: ~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

Postby Soren. » Sun Oct 28, 2012 2:04 pm

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Re: ~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

Postby Soren. » Mon Oct 29, 2012 1:12 pm

I floated ever so slowly, until suddenly slow became a bad thing. Slow made me speed up near a planet's orbit area.
AGAGAAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAAGAGAGGA!!!!
Christa, you fool! You never should've come here to this planet.
SETHEANA!? HEEELP MEEEE!
Nah, I'd rather see you blow-up.
MEAN.
I know. Have a nice trip, meet ya there.
Cool, bye. Oh wait..... AGAGAGAAGAGAAGAAGGAAGAGAGAGAGAAGAGAGAGAGAAGAGAGAGAGAG!!!!!!
AND I crashed into the planet.
Oh-oh-oh-oh HOT!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!
I jumped up and down, my feet burning red. THE FLOOR BURNED!!!!
OW-OW-OW-OW-OW-OW HOT!!!!!!!
HaHaHa. Such a cute show. Now, it's time to get to work.
What, more work?
No no, not your work. Work on you, but you don't do it.
The Witch Docter will see Christa now.
Oh, goody goody! Sounds like it's your turn. MEN!
Several PUPPIES came and handcuffed me, and one shoved a sock in my mouth.
Let's go.
MMPH! MMPH MM!!!
Curse gags. Anyway, I was led to a room where there was no light. I was chained to a table when they flashed the lights on.
Hello, friend. I am the Witch Docter. Call me Rocka.
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He picked up tools after tools, until he picked up this HUGE needle.
MMMPPPH!!!!
The Witch Docter laughed and shot the needle into my mouth as he opened it real fast. I screamed as he pulled it out and started to drill inside it.
MUHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA! I FOUND WHAT I NEED!
He pulled out a tooth of mine, it was surrounded by weird electronicy beams.
THIS contains your every move and breath. You can still breath, don't worry, but moving anything else is now impossible.
I tried to move, but he was right! I CAN'T MOVE!!!
Beautiful work, Docter! When can we meet again?
Tomorrow. THEN we can turn her into the "puppet."
THE WHAT!!!???
Wonderful news, I'll see you then!
She handed him a wad of cash and unchained me. She put a muzzle on my mouth and a collar around my neck.
You're now my puppy, Mitsi!
MITSI!? COME. ON!!!!!
Come along, Mitsi. We have much to do.
She dragged me back into a cavern and threw me into a cage. Chains locked onto my body and dragged me into the air like a cacoon. Lazer beams, security cameras, and one last thing. DRAGONS.
Sweet dreams, shark bait.
She pressed a button and where I was dangling had sharks in a pit. RIGHT under me.


The next morning, everything turned off and I dropped to the ground. Setheana came in and took me to the Witch Docter's place again.
Docter.... are you ready?
Indeed.
Perfect, get the shackles ready, come on child swing.
She chained me by my arms by a pole, and kids piled in. I then realized what this was. A kid puppet show.
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Re: ~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

Postby RevolutionMockingjay » Mon Oct 29, 2012 1:22 pm

*le gasp* OMW THIS IS JUST GETTING BETTER AND BETTER! MOOOOOOORE!!
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Because of her, they all think they're invincible.
The sun persists in rising, so I make myself stand.
Be a distraction so people forget what the real problems are.

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Re: ~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

Postby Soren. » Mon Oct 29, 2012 1:59 pm

LOL, i'll try and get some in on Thurs. i'll be gone Mon-Wed on a school trip. soooooo, yeah.
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Re: ~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

Postby RevolutionMockingjay » Mon Oct 29, 2012 2:05 pm

Flashpaw100 wrote:LOL, i'll try and get some in on Thurs. i'll be gone Mon-Wed on a school trip. soooooo, yeah.

Can't you do some.... now?
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Re: ~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

Postby Soren. » Mon Oct 29, 2012 2:28 pm

Sadly, no. I need rest for my trip. Bye, gang! See ya on Thurs!!!
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Re: ~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

Postby RevolutionMockingjay » Mon Oct 29, 2012 2:33 pm

Flashpaw100 wrote:Sadly, no. I need rest for my trip. Bye, gang! See ya on Thurs!!!

Adios! :)
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Re: ~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

Postby tigerflame10 » Mon Oct 29, 2012 6:21 pm

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Your mom took Ed, didn't she? Cuz I got Bob!!
Ill face myself
To cross out what Ive become
Erase myself
And let go of what Ive done
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Re: ~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

Postby Soren. » Mon Oct 29, 2012 11:47 pm

yup. curse parents, lol!
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Re: ~Lost In Space~ Book 2. of TJOC

Postby Soren. » Thu Nov 01, 2012 7:50 am

i have returned from my trip, i'll write more soon!!!
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