Dear Diary, I broke out of Prison

[wildfire6]

NOTE:This is the continuation of fictional diary of a girl named Cathrine (Kitty) Walker and the beginning of the diary of a girl named Bri Smith, none of tge events or people mentioned are real or based off of real people. The same applies to the places and events, thank you.

Link to book 1, Dear Diary I murdered my best friend

[Areater]

Yay! Book 2!

[wildfire6]

Dear Diary,
I'm in prison. They caught me and I got put in a cell with the apparently notorious murderess Bri Smith. Bri and I get along alright I guess, she's better than most of my friends at school. Our release dates are close to, so we'll be rehabilitated together. Yep, I'm hanging out with murderers, next thing you know I'll be joining the mafia or something equaly bad.

XOXO
Kitty

[Areater]

*Faints from awesomeness of story*

[wildfire6]

Dear Diary,
Oh dear lord if I have ever written anything more moronic than that! Oh well, Kitty told me going in that on the first entry, "You will be utterly amazed how completely idiotic you sound."
She was right.
My name's Bri Smith, I'm 16 and I murdered my stepfather. Of course, everybody forgets how he beat me half to death every night, guess that isn't important. Being dead must make you a saint once they catch your killer, like Erika, the sl*t that Kitty took out.
Descriptions, I've got brown eyes (That my momma insists look like chocolate), and Black Hair. There you go.

That's all I'm writing,
Bri.

[Live to Write]

(Hiya wildfire6! Been reading this, it's interesting, wasn't bothering to do feedback before, but this secound 'book' is very interesting, so I thought to say hi and to let you know I enjoy this, it's entertaining. )
(oh and as a writer to a writer, you shouldn't change too many of your original ideas or it'll sound like someone else's work, I think for the first one just add in a few more journal entries(not now, but if you ever decided to publish! )and it'd be great to read for an average teen. Plus you could have like two books in one so like the first then the secound, so you don't actually have to change anything really then. )
(So yeah, good job so far. )
(oh and I think that in the first book if you change between characters (like it's been suggested a few times) that it won't seem like Kitty is telling the story so much anymore at least that's what I think)
(anyway, shall get back to rping!)

[wildfire6]

XDD Thank you Talia23! Yeah, that and I would write 1st person the rest of the story, the entries would be their own seperate chapeters.))
Yes! To the Rps!))

[Sillow <3]

*Squeal* BOOK 2!

[Live to Write]

XDD Thank you Talia23! Yeah, that and I would write 1st person the rest of the story, the entries would be their own seperate chapeters.))
Yes! To the Rps!))

(You're welcome. )
(Yep, off we go!)
("We're off to see the wizard! The wonderful wizard of Oz!")
(I don't know why I put that really...XD)

[nicole3139]

WOW!!!!!!