luc wrote:-snip-
I'm about to post my story but I was wondering if anyone could give me some opinions on my custom/story? Thank you so much.
I like both of them c:
I really adore the gold and blue color scheme in your dress-up and your story is very creative! The only very small suggestion I have is that you could try splitting up the first bog paragraph in your story so that it's a little more balanced (if that makes any sense at all).